All Comments on 'Black Bikini'

I loved your story and would love to read more

Wish my stories were half as good---Best of all they don't have anal or drunken escapades, 8-10 inch dickeys or 38ddd boobs- Love all the stories that I have read

Marilyn

this guy write great story. i just wanna thanx him and expected some more to write...

This story was incredble, it made me cum twice!!!

Yet another winner. I REALLY hope you continue to write this stuff...

made me very hot and your sister is hot would like her someday.

You have done it again. This story is one of the best I have ever read. But, I don't like the part where the aunt and uncle join both of them. I would prefer if you describe in more detail about both of them before including other people. But, that said, keep up the good job.

that was great apart from the end bit about the aunt and uncle joining in. i almost hit miyself in the afce i came that much!

the story started good but you ruined it by putting in the orgy at the end would have been better to have left the aunt and uncle out and to have them admit the next morning that they heard them and that they were brother and sister also or perhaps cousins

This is a really good story its little short but overall a great story i wish i had relatives like that. Keep it up

I was skeptic when I saw how short, but I am THRILLED that I continued reading. Superb. and don't listen to everyone whining about the aunt and uncle thing. That was just an exciting twist (and a better one than half the stories I read in this section)

Im usually disgusted by even the thought of incest but this is really good i was actually jerkin it halfway through

So. Freaking. Hot!!!

good until u added in the aunt and uncle part

ive been reading though your stories i read quickly so i can clear the whole list,,, i have to say your story ideas are fantastic but you seem to be having issues to put them into words correctly and your rushing it to much put a little more effort into theses small stories they can be top notch with some work

Quite intriguing, very sexy :)

Nice story - my sister used to have a little polka dot bikini she would wear when she was 17 and I was 15 - I masturbated many a time to that image of her in that bikini - this story brought back some great memories - thanks

N.

When I wank to this one, I see a teenage Alicia Silverstone,

I shoot my cum every time I see Alicia's Small Titties, and

her tight Ass!!!!!

Will i touht the aunt & uncle part just made it even better a 4 some wow just great if u ask me yummy yummy.

CONTINUE

my sister is a teaser she walk around in nickers and bra mum will tell to put cloths on but she don,t we been fucking from an early age i have been on double date with her friends they dont know i am her brother she kiss and feel my cock in front of them

no good rushed and way to unrealistic and stupid the orgy killed any thing that may have good about the story.

I think this one is a bit of a misfire.

Though most pornography stories, incest stories in particular due to the societal taboo of the act, are fictional, not true. However regardless, the story should at least have some realism about it. The theme, scene, action, to be a worthwhile story, must have some degree of realism. This one doesn't have the believeable aspects to it.

If your sister ever feels like she wants to duck an older man again have her email me ok samhop42@gmail.com. And that his for any other young women out there. I live in oklahoma1955

would love to read what happens next

I woulsd have given this story 10 on 10 if the aunt and uncle had not been added.A separate story should have been written with a fucking between the aunt/nephew and another one between.uncle/niece,My elder sister used to wash her thongs after she had taken her bath.She once forgot to do it and her white thong was full of her vagina moisture and together with the smell of piss.i jerked,and had one of the fiercest cum in my life.I think she became aware of it because I had left a little bit of my cum where her pussy used to be,if not she would have scolded me.She never washed her thongs after that and i did smell and lick her dirty panties during the 5 years she stayed home.I still have hard ons and cum when I think of these moments.

A nice way to enjoy multiple partners. This story was red hot!

My story isn't nearly as serial but, I was never so turned as the first time I saw my older sister's boobs. I was 12 and my sister was 15 at the time.

My sister was standing half way up the stairs talking to my mom who was AR the top of the stairs. She was wearing a night shirt with no bra on. From where I was standing I could see right up her shirt. I saw her big firm boobs with really puffy nipples standing straight out tenting her shirt. My deck became rock hard as I just stared at her puffy nipples.

If anyone is interested in hearing anymore you can email me at : wtrs111@aol.com or you can text me at: 910-538-4007

Lol, posting your phone number is prolly not the brightest thing in the world to do on the net, rofl!

Lol u put "you're....bikini"

You are bikini??😂

I like my women like I like your stories, short, hot and a genuine turn on.

Why, all wanking and fucking,and no story.

Big deal brother fucks sister.

Aunt and uncle fuck.

What happened to a story.

BOO!!! BOO !!!

Why didn’t you say they were twins?

Both 18 ?

Good sex.

Any follow up planned?

You're obviously a Virginia, just the writing is so elementary for a sexual story

Another superb tale in the collection, loved it

Fantastic! Story could be fleshed out a little but I love a nice quick sexy read.

It's called a story for a reason this was not a story there was no build up or nothing it was just I fuvked my sister and aunt and they fuvked the uncle you need look up the definition on what a story is and on how to write 1

Average, a 3

Bill S.

Absolute BULLSHIT. Tasteless, no finesse, nothing good about it. Just stuffing his penis into his sister's mouth - can it get worse?

Don't pay any attention to anonymous wankers. Good, hot story. Fun to read.