by Jeanluc4you
This is very hot. Please give me the "more to cum". I can't wait to see where this new relationship goes.
lets hear about the first time her young mouth gets to taste daddys cock
I received a feedback email message from "Anonymous" who was angrily raging about getting to the end of the story and seeing "more to cum". His words were childish and clearly the idiotic ravings of someone who is not only a coward, but should be banned from the site - which he of course knows, thus his cowardly hiding behind "Anonymous". To him I have a short reply, "Fuck Off Bitch."
I welcome constructive feedback from everyone, and respect your choice to submit your comment or feedback anonymously - I've done it myself, but people like this are nothing more than immature brats who whine about everything, but don't do it publicly because they know their behavior would result in them getting swatted like the nuissance mosquito that they are.
They are simply... irrelevant.
To the rest of you I offer my sincere thanks for your honest feedback and am glad you have enjoyed my story.
I have submitted the next chapter and it should be posted soon.
Jeanluc
Thought the story was well written, very descriptive and truly erotic.... Keep up the good work, a great topic and good execution... as for you Anonymous critics, your words are worthless if you don't have the balls to leave a name and hide behind anonymity.
I was intrigued from the very get go! You have done an excellent job of telling a very believable story. Well done and I can not wait to hear the finish. Don't fret over the nuts out there honey. Terri Vonlott
If this was ever to happppen this would be the way I'd want it to so sexy and secretive but at same time in plain view. Your a very lucky man. Please continue story!
Wow absolutely loved it. I happened to have experienced some of this story but not to the full extent. Hopefully I will have that pleasure. Some day 😃
The fact that your story is based in truth makes it even more erotic. To have your beautiful stepdaughter watch your wife give you a blow job must be so incredibly horny. I am completely hooked and can't wait to read the remaining chapters.