Faithful Ch. 01

Spicy Start!

Delightful tease - looking forward to the next!

Very Good

As a stand alone story I thought it was just right, as infidelity goes. Too many husbands (and wive's) take their spouses for granted after awhile and typically allow their loving marital attitude to diminish and one or the other misses and craves love, respect and sexual fulfillment.
I enjoyed your story, by itself! I notice it was chapter 1 so, I'm definitely looking for chapter 2.
Thanks.

Well done

Now that she has been naughty, where does she go from here?

Thanks for the well written story

By the title

I hope it doesn't turn into one of those storie's where the wife starts becoming more and more UNfaithful by the week. and more uncaring by the day. I really do hope this wife tries to stay Faithful...but...it doesn't look like it

Why would a writer make such a big thing about the title of this story.

And then write about a woman that will almost certainly be un faithful. Why not just change the title? To "How a woman became unfaithful."

That would make more sense.

4****! Too short for 5*****.

But it was sexy and kind of hot.

Not sexy, not kind of hot.

Simply a fetish fantasy tale, and uninteresting.

So What Do We Have Here

A cheating wife and an incestuous father and daughter. How wonderful.

DAMN

You have got to be joking!

You stopped there!! A VERY HOT story and I felt like giving it a 5, but because of where you stopped I thought about giving you a 1.

Ended up giving you a 4!

Uh....wtf?

Ok, I really don't get it. This is an incest story, why in hell isn't it posted in that category? There's a time and place for sick and twisted shit....folks, this isn't it. Move the remarkably brief yet poorly written piece of crap to the proper place, please, I'm sure the voting will be much higher there.

now you have to get the husband involved.