play should be more talkative. and mom shouldnt give herself so easily or she should realise what she is doing and make sex more horny then to just wondering
I disagree, the story would have lost momentum if the play was more talkative.
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Anonymous07/13/04
verry good
enjoyed ur story as it realy happened to me verry much the same way when me and my mom became lovers,and remained so to the day she passed on.I will alwayse rember our love making and sharing. Thanks to ur story I just relived the first time I made love to my mother.Though I was a little younger than ur hero. I was only 17.
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Anonymous08/16/06
One of the best I have readed
Very Very good I can only hope you keep up the good work Thank you Roger
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Anonymous04/21/09
son's dick goes up where it belongs
This is a fine example of the interplay of a son's lust for his mother's cunt and a mother's need to have her boy's dick stuffed up between her legs. Luke is a cocky bastard and it doesn't take much for him to go all the way. His Mom goes out to dinner with him and confides that she's not wearing panties. You want to check? she asks, and brings his hand up under her dress to her naked motherly twat. Her boy likes what he's feeling, as any son would--it's his own mother's cunt! He messes around with it but he's aiming for a lot more. When they get home, Mom is already keyed to what's in store for her. Her son's got something real hard in his pants, and he doesn't hesitate to shove it up where it was destined to go all along--his own mother's precious warm welcoming twat! Luke enjoys the ultimate satisfaction of any son, and blows his balls up his own birth canal!
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Anonymous11/27/09
Like any good story,
Like any good story, left me wanting more. Writing - excellent, character development - not bad, needs more depth and would have fleshed the story out more. All in all, loved how you handled it just wish there were 20 pages of it.
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Anonymous12/03/09
i love mom son story hmmm
i love to see mom son story and movies i have like of them hmm but i real love this story its great i find this site few days ago and enjoy some of the story please keep the good work comeing thank you
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Anonymous12/05/09
Going home twice?
Something wrong with the sequence. There is a repetition of the "going home" cry , you can´t be at home and then four lines down the story ,after an finger orgasm, go back home again. Cut and copy scheme with text failed miserably.
Need a proofer.
Enrique
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Anonymous12/28/09
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Y'know, this story might've been okay if the stupid-ass author'd just learn about this great, new word -- "And." Or maybe "But." "Or," perhaps? :) The writing was FAR from "excellent," even in the most lateral context. Superficial linguistic mentality -- Check! Corny plot synopsis -- Check! :(
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Anonymous05/06/11
his mother loves the feel of her son's semen flooding her cunt
Luke is a mighty lucky boy. His mother's wild about what her son's got swinging between his legs, she'd love for him to shove it up between her own legs! It's a very common desire in mothers, they look at their big strong very fit boy, at the top of his sexual prowess, and their motherly cunt leaks like crazy. What's a son to do? His big fat dick tingles knowing his mother wants, NEEDS! it to fill the emptiness in her hungering cunt. Luke's got a pair of hot young balls that cry out to get emptied up the cunt he came out of. What's the problem? He's got the big stiff prick, his mom's got the twat that needs her boy's big prick, it's happening everywhere today, thousands of times a day. Guys talk about the joy of motherfucking with their buddies, mothers praise their boy's youthful hardness and stamina to other moms, and more and more boys get to cream the one twat all boys dream of.
JUST A TENDER LOVE STORY, THE LOVE OF A BOY FOR HIS MOTHER. OF COURSE THE FUCKING WAS PRETTY GOOD ALSO. DID YOU EVER THINK OF A PART 2, MIGHT BE NICE....................................LAROC OF AGES
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Anonymous08/26/13
Not bad - 'Laroc' ???
- And what can she (mother) describe, when she was almost completely intoxicated with alcohol? - Just like her son ..
Surely this story, it story about DRINKING ALCOHOL! - About getting drunk..
- Because WHAT and HOW much - a man can remember from so drunken "sex"???
English
hot but but should be more talkative
play should be more talkative. and mom shouldnt give herself so easily or she should realise what she is doing and make sex more horny then to just wondering
Another great entry.
I disagree, the story would have lost momentum if the play was more talkative.
verry good
enjoyed ur story as it realy happened to me verry much the same way when me and my mom became lovers,and remained so to the day she passed on.I will alwayse rember our love making and sharing. Thanks to ur story I just relived the first time I made love to my mother.Though I was a little younger than ur hero. I was only 17.
One of the best I have readed
Very Very good I can only hope you keep up the good work Thank you Roger
son's dick goes up where it belongs
This is a fine example of the interplay of a son's lust for his mother's cunt and a mother's need to have her boy's dick stuffed up between her legs. Luke is a cocky bastard and it doesn't take much for him to go all the way. His Mom goes out to dinner with him and confides that she's not wearing panties. You want to check? she asks, and brings his hand up under her dress to her naked motherly twat. Her boy likes what he's feeling, as any son would--it's his own mother's cunt! He messes around with it but he's aiming for a lot more. When they get home, Mom is already keyed to what's in store for her. Her son's got something real hard in his pants, and he doesn't hesitate to shove it up where it was destined to go all along--his own mother's precious warm welcoming twat! Luke enjoys the ultimate satisfaction of any son, and blows his balls up his own birth canal!
Like any good story,
Like any good story, left me wanting more. Writing - excellent, character development - not bad, needs more depth and would have fleshed the story out more. All in all, loved how you handled it just wish there were 20 pages of it.
i love mom son story hmmm
i love to see mom son story and movies i have like of them hmm but i real love this story its great i find this site few days ago and enjoy some of the story please keep the good work comeing thank you
Going home twice?
Something wrong with the sequence. There is a repetition of the "going home" cry , you can´t be at home and then four lines down the story ,after an finger orgasm, go back home again. Cut and copy scheme with text failed miserably.
Need a proofer.
Enrique
...
Y'know, this story might've been okay if the stupid-ass author'd just learn about this great, new word -- "And." Or maybe "But." "Or," perhaps? :) The writing was FAR from "excellent," even in the most lateral context. Superficial linguistic mentality -- Check! Corny plot synopsis -- Check! :(
his mother loves the feel of her son's semen flooding her cunt
Luke is a mighty lucky boy. His mother's wild about what her son's got swinging between his legs, she'd love for him to shove it up between her own legs! It's a very common desire in mothers, they look at their big strong very fit boy, at the top of his sexual prowess, and their motherly cunt leaks like crazy. What's a son to do? His big fat dick tingles knowing his mother wants, NEEDS! it to fill the emptiness in her hungering cunt. Luke's got a pair of hot young balls that cry out to get emptied up the cunt he came out of. What's the problem? He's got the big stiff prick, his mom's got the twat that needs her boy's big prick, it's happening everywhere today, thousands of times a day. Guys talk about the joy of motherfucking with their buddies, mothers praise their boy's youthful hardness and stamina to other moms, and more and more boys get to cream the one twat all boys dream of.
NOT BAD AT ALL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JUST A TENDER LOVE STORY, THE LOVE OF A BOY FOR HIS MOTHER. OF COURSE THE FUCKING WAS PRETTY GOOD ALSO. DID YOU EVER THINK OF A PART 2, MIGHT BE NICE....................................LAROC OF AGES
Not bad - 'Laroc' ???
- And what can she (mother) describe, when she was almost completely intoxicated with alcohol? - Just like her son ..
Surely this story, it story about DRINKING ALCOHOL! - About getting drunk..
- Because WHAT and HOW much - a man can remember from so drunken "sex"???
I like stories with this type of British voice, if that makes any sense at all.
love it
This is one of the most intense stories I've read yet
Beautiful
Sex and love, the greatest combination.
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