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All Comments on 'Fisher King'

by Nigel Debonnaire

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vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
Cool.

I think it could have lived without the Jesus line at the end but an excellent poem otherwise.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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think the Jesus line makes the title. I would opted for the incorrect "don't" instead of "doesn't". But WTF do I know about Fisher Kings? I would be careful of "empty/full" it doesn't seem to fit it.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 13 years ago
You tell a very good story

And you drive eyes onwards to the return - good stuff. M

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