Considering making a full length story from it, possibly a novel, that will both lead up to it (previous year) and continue from the point of the crash if I get enough interest. If anyone would like to see more, comment or pm me and let me know.
Thank you anon for your comment.
Thank you for leaving your comments. I will start to work on more of this story, and I'll try to have it posted by first of december. Thank you again for your votes!
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Anonymous11/24/10
Good chance to work in
Earlier schoolgirl play, tittie play, mastrubation etc. All those things that make daddys want to fuck their sexy little cock tease daughters. The girls want it from their dads too, so what's the problem with it anyway?
An enjoyable read, erotic and well written. It made sense to fuck to stay warm, it is a good way to get the blood flowing.
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Anonymous03/07/12
Guess I didn't buy into the concept of what happened
so it didn't do anything for me. Seems like you could use an editor yourself by the way. If English is not your first language then you've done quite well after all. The cadence of your writing "sounds" German in some places. I'm probably wrong.
English
Gift
Nice story. Is there more?
Thinking about it
Considering making a full length story from it, possibly a novel, that will both lead up to it (previous year) and continue from the point of the crash if I get enough interest. If anyone would like to see more, comment or pm me and let me know.
Thank you anon for your comment.
More please
This is nice I would like to read more about them
Continue, please
start with right after the ER, but if you must build it up, do so, but not too long of a build up
Way too short
Continue with the development
Working on development as requested
Thank you for leaving your comments. I will start to work on more of this story, and I'll try to have it posted by first of december. Thank you again for your votes!
Good chance to work in
Earlier schoolgirl play, tittie play, mastrubation etc. All those things that make daddys want to fuck their sexy little cock tease daughters. The girls want it from their dads too, so what's the problem with it anyway?
Nice read
Real nice. Continue on with it, Please.
A little short, but a complete story
An enjoyable read, erotic and well written. It made sense to fuck to stay warm, it is a good way to get the blood flowing.
Guess I didn't buy into the concept of what happened
so it didn't do anything for me. Seems like you could use an editor yourself by the way. If English is not your first language then you've done quite well after all. The cadence of your writing "sounds" German in some places. I'm probably wrong.
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