I didn't rate the story because while it was very hot, it was just too implausible. I'd love to see more of Becky's acting out, but in something a little more believable.
Having just read Becky's first misadventure, it's clear she not only has a pattern of cheating and lying about it afterwards, but she's seeking increasingly dangerous situations in which to explore her kink. This relationship never had a future.
Becky's adventures are hot but trending toward getting riskier. Plus she will lie and pretend that nothing happened. Prehaps not the best partner for someone with more conventional mores. Cutting her loose was probably best
Thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous02/08/11
More Becky!
These are the best stories on literotica... Make some more!
Agree with the others to see a continuation of this series...although it sounds like you are having them break up.
This story was not as well written as the first one...it seemed to be a bit rushed and some parts were just not as believable as the first one. Still, enjoyed the story and hope to see another!
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Anonymous07/23/11
Grr..
I hate this bitch, please just make him catch her in the fucking act. It's sooo well written. But justice is sometimes needed. Please?
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Anonymous01/30/12
loved it!
all of your becky stories are just so good. I hope you make another scenario.
"I was heartbroken. Right behind this door my sweet girlfriend was being fucked by some guy with a big dick she had just met."
After her behaviour in 'My Roommate Takes My Girlfriend', does any of this really come as a surprise? She's clearly determined to treat her so-called boyfriend as a doormat and continually wipe her jism-stained boots all over him.
English
Great job!!
Would love to see another story or two with these characters before they break up! Love the teasing and where it ends up leading!
Weird...
I didn't rate the story because while it was very hot, it was just too implausible. I'd love to see more of Becky's acting out, but in something a little more believable.
The cheating kind
Having just read Becky's first misadventure, it's clear she not only has a pattern of cheating and lying about it afterwards, but she's seeking increasingly dangerous situations in which to explore her kink. This relationship never had a future.
Thanks!
Very good work, thanks! Hope you'll continue!
As some one said
Totally implausable! Great! That's what stories are about!
Another good installment
I very much enjoy these two characters you've created. I'd love to see Becky with more opportunities to tease for him.
Yup
Becky's adventures are hot but trending toward getting riskier. Plus she will lie and pretend that nothing happened. Prehaps not the best partner for someone with more conventional mores. Cutting her loose was probably best
Thanks for sharing.
More Becky!
These are the best stories on literotica... Make some more!
More Becky!
I agree. Please write more Becky stories. Maybe his brother does her or father cheats on his mother for the first time and it's with Becky.
More...
Agree with the others to see a continuation of this series...although it sounds like you are having them break up.
This story was not as well written as the first one...it seemed to be a bit rushed and some parts were just not as believable as the first one. Still, enjoyed the story and hope to see another!
Grr..
I hate this bitch, please just make him catch her in the fucking act. It's sooo well written. But justice is sometimes needed. Please?
loved it!
all of your becky stories are just so good. I hope you make another scenario.
wheres mark
good story.. where is the mark one?
"I was heartbroken. Right behind this door my sweet girlfriend was being fucked by some guy with a big dick she had just met."
After her behaviour in 'My Roommate Takes My Girlfriend', does any of this really come as a surprise? She's clearly determined to treat her so-called boyfriend as a doormat and continually wipe her jism-stained boots all over him.
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