All Comments on 'Good Morning'

by Ygori

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I like the story, but man, am I confused LOL

RHinSCRHinSCover 13 years ago
Good One

Thats much better than waking up to a pissed off and ugly one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Just seems to me...

that this story would work better as an 'erotic coupling' - other than one or two phrases, there was neither humor nor satire. Plus, more people read the ECs than humor. Believe me, I know!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I like it

Like the title surmised, I like it so far. I'd be really happy if you kept it going, maybe stretched out the mystery of who the girl is a bit longer

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous