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sigh....I hope this story is developing as expected..Shawn, Susan, and Shawna together....I love the twist and the mystery around Shawn's character. You can be a good suspense/romance writer.!!!! Write the next chapter soon!!!!
Good Job - Keep it up
I'm glad I found this story. Nice sub plots and well written. I love the serial nature of the story and anxiously await the next installment. You have made reading it lots of fun.
I am now a committed fan of yours.
It seems as if trouble has a way of finding Susan.
Another good chapter and as with the whole story, it was very fast paced.
intrigue and subterfuge is very heavy around the couple of lovers, and I hope that it works out for the best.
Thanks for the read.
I don't get it...who it this guy?
your character development is crazy! totally illogical.
it was interesting in the beginning, but now it's just plain weird.
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