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The Lawyer and the Killer Ch. 09

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/30/10

sigh....I hope this story is developing as expected..Shawn, Susan, and Shawna together....I love the twist and the mystery around Shawn's character. You can be a good suspense/romance writer.!!!! Write the next chapter soon!!!!

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by pkma11/30/10

Good Job - Keep it up

I'm glad I found this story. Nice sub plots and well written. I love the serial nature of the story and anxiously await the next installment. You have made reading it lots of fun.

I am now a committed fan of yours.

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by digdaddyrich12/02/10

It seems as if trouble has a way of finding Susan.

Another good chapter and as with the whole story, it was very fast paced.

intrigue and subterfuge is very heavy around the couple of lovers, and I hope that it works out for the best.

Thanks for the read.

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by Anonymous12/24/10

I don't get it...who it this guy?

your character development is crazy! totally illogical.
it was interesting in the beginning, but now it's just plain weird.

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