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Pushing Boundaries Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/30/10

*****

Excellent potential. Still suggest getting that editor.

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by cheetahgrl_0712/01/10

Love

I loved it!

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by Anonymous12/21/10

Great update

Poor Dee, I think that she and David are both going to enjoy the fight. I hope that he doesn't try to play her like he seems to do the other girls at the school. Thanks

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by Anonymous08/26/14

EDIT!

This story needs an editor, as well as punctuation and thorough read-through before it is resubmitted. It's a cute narrative, but the poor grammar and structure is incredibly distracting.

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