My first bad review. Sorry you didn't like it, but thanks for your opininion. I didn't feel it was one of my best either, but I also didn't think it was that bad...lol
I didn't think it was a bad story. It started nice but at some point it seemed rushed. But that doesn't make it a bad story. I will continue to read works where you appear as the author.
Thanks Cutie and MizT, and you're right, I felt the ending was rushed. I should have stopped saved it and came back to do the ending when I felt I had more time. :)
i really love the story. and its a shame that one person gave you a bad reply. but most i am sure love it as i did.
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Anonymous12/02/10
Very Good
This was great, I hope they keep it up seeing as mom is gone so much.
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Anonymous12/02/10
Reminds Me of My Senior Prom
I had come home late and was staying with my divorced father. I had just fucked my boyfriend, and future husband, in the car after the dance, but was horny as hell and not quite satisfied. Daddy was awake and just wanted to talk, I thought. The next thing I knew we were on the couch kissing open mouthed. My pussy was soaking wet when he pulled the top of my strapless gown down exposing my tits and excited nipples which he quickly sucked. I was panting like a dog and knew we were headed toward fucking. It was sooo good. We still fuck a few times a year when we can, and we're nasty when we do. I'm definitely his daddy whore. I'm cumming just thinking about him and his juicy dick. So you see why I like your story. Luv and Wet Kisses xxxoooxxx, Daddy's Girl
First of all, people like the first commenter really, really bother me. Criticism and opinions are only helpful and fruitful if they are polite and constructive, not rude and haughty. I wonder if "anonymous" is an actual seasoned, professional author? If he was, i doubt he would have responded in such a manner.
That said, I liked the story. I am just starting out myself writing stories and am sure mine could be better, but that all comes in time.
Keep it up! :)
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Anonymous02/01/13
You are so fucking HOT cumminkasey
Dear cumminkasey you are such a hot little fucking slut of a storie writer...I'd love to try your wet baby making hole and tight ass hole on my cock you slut...I cannot say how much I love your daddy and daughter incest stories, thay are gist too fucking hot, especially the one with daddy pimping out his sweet young daughter...When I read your stories I'm constantly hard and throbbing from the beginning to the end and always shoot a gallon of hot cum...Love you, love your writing, please keep them cuming and me also...
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Anonymous07/02/13
a fine story
Everyone knows that plenty of boys like to think about their mother's mommy-hole and lots of them would jump at the chance to stick their hard young cock up their own mother's cunt. So why should it be surprising that girls like to picture their father's big fat daddy-dick and would love to have their father blow his daddy-balls up their cute little twat? A boy knows that he came out of his mother's cunt and he'll always love and desire her mommy-cunt for that reason. Just like a girl knows that her daddy's sperm helped make her, so what her daddy's heavy loaded balls produce is magical to her. When a father wants to shoot his darling baby girl a nice big dose of his thick white semen, the girl spreads her legs wide and her twat opens like a flower to receive her daddy's loving gift.
English
What was this?
What this was, was a total waste of 5 minutes of my life. Pathetic story, and so poorly written. Don't give up the day job.
Wow
My first bad review. Sorry you didn't like it, but thanks for your opininion. I didn't feel it was one of my best either, but I also didn't think it was that bad...lol
Nice
I didn't think it was a bad story. It started nice but at some point it seemed rushed. But that doesn't make it a bad story. I will continue to read works where you appear as the author.
Great
I loved it .You are a good writter dont listen to the others.Hope it wont stop you from writtin a part 2
Thanks
Thanks Cutie and MizT, and you're right, I felt the ending was rushed. I should have stopped saved it and came back to do the ending when I felt I had more time. :)
love how daddy got what he and you wanted
i really love the story. and its a shame that one person gave you a bad reply. but most i am sure love it as i did.
Very Good
This was great, I hope they keep it up seeing as mom is gone so much.
Reminds Me of My Senior Prom
I had come home late and was staying with my divorced father. I had just fucked my boyfriend, and future husband, in the car after the dance, but was horny as hell and not quite satisfied. Daddy was awake and just wanted to talk, I thought. The next thing I knew we were on the couch kissing open mouthed. My pussy was soaking wet when he pulled the top of my strapless gown down exposing my tits and excited nipples which he quickly sucked. I was panting like a dog and knew we were headed toward fucking. It was sooo good. We still fuck a few times a year when we can, and we're nasty when we do. I'm definitely his daddy whore. I'm cumming just thinking about him and his juicy dick. So you see why I like your story. Luv and Wet Kisses xxxoooxxx, Daddy's Girl
Great Story!
Loved it! Now I need to go read the rest of your stories! Thanks for sharing!
Oh boy...
First of all, people like the first commenter really, really bother me. Criticism and opinions are only helpful and fruitful if they are polite and constructive, not rude and haughty. I wonder if "anonymous" is an actual seasoned, professional author? If he was, i doubt he would have responded in such a manner.
That said, I liked the story. I am just starting out myself writing stories and am sure mine could be better, but that all comes in time.
Keep it up! :)
You are so fucking HOT cumminkasey
Dear cumminkasey you are such a hot little fucking slut of a storie writer...I'd love to try your wet baby making hole and tight ass hole on my cock you slut...I cannot say how much I love your daddy and daughter incest stories, thay are gist too fucking hot, especially the one with daddy pimping out his sweet young daughter...When I read your stories I'm constantly hard and throbbing from the beginning to the end and always shoot a gallon of hot cum...Love you, love your writing, please keep them cuming and me also...
a fine story
Everyone knows that plenty of boys like to think about their mother's mommy-hole and lots of them would jump at the chance to stick their hard young cock up their own mother's cunt. So why should it be surprising that girls like to picture their father's big fat daddy-dick and would love to have their father blow his daddy-balls up their cute little twat? A boy knows that he came out of his mother's cunt and he'll always love and desire her mommy-cunt for that reason. Just like a girl knows that her daddy's sperm helped make her, so what her daddy's heavy loaded balls produce is magical to her. When a father wants to shoot his darling baby girl a nice big dose of his thick white semen, the girl spreads her legs wide and her twat opens like a flower to receive her daddy's loving gift.
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