All Comments on 'Christmas at the Office'

by EmmaHawthorne

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texasacetexasaceover 13 years ago
You write really, really hot and convincing dialogue. .

I was on the verge for taking 3rd place after the boss finished. You may enjoy reading this one... let me know. Ace

My first published store... "One In A Million Girl"

http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh....php?id=438862

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
more please

Thank you for the fun story. I'd love some spanks in the next one. xo

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Ugh

She thought she was fucking one guy. It was another, one she didn't want to fuck. Hello! Can you say rape? Gross, and full of typos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
lousy

"That god I also had a sizable glass of wine in hand."

WTF does that mean?

Learn the difference between OF and OR

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Read

Why be so critical, it was an entertaining, good read for a short story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I liked it!

Here's five more stars for you and my hope that you will continue to grace the readers of Lit with your talent.

Keep it coming!

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