I was on the verge for taking 3rd place after the boss finished. You may enjoy reading this one... let me know. Ace My first published store... "One In A Million Girl" http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh....php?i d=438862
Thank you for the fun story. I'd love some spanks in the next one. xo
She thought she was fucking one guy. It was another, one she didn't want to fuck. Hello! Can you say rape? Gross, and full of typos.
"That god I also had a sizable glass of wine in hand." WTF does that mean? Learn the difference between OF and OR
Why be so critical, it was an entertaining, good read for a short story.
Here's five more stars for you and my hope that you will continue to grace the readers of Lit with your talent. Keep it coming!
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You write really, really hot and convincing dialogue. .
I was on the verge for taking 3rd place after the boss finished. You may enjoy reading this one... let me know. Ace
My first published store... "One In A Million Girl"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh....php?i d=438862
more please
Thank you for the fun story. I'd love some spanks in the next one. xo
Ugh
She thought she was fucking one guy. It was another, one she didn't want to fuck. Hello! Can you say rape? Gross, and full of typos.
lousy
"That god I also had a sizable glass of wine in hand."
WTF does that mean?
Learn the difference between OF and OR
Good Read
Why be so critical, it was an entertaining, good read for a short story.
I liked it!
Here's five more stars for you and my hope that you will continue to grace the readers of Lit with your talent.
Keep it coming!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Christmas at the Office or
More submissions by EmmaHawthorne.