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Better than the last few
It still seems like you're trying to cram a lot of story into a small space. It feels like someone telling me a story when they've got a time limit.
Great
keep it comming
Very Interesting
Discovery is on both sides, but she does seem to have a self-destruct urge.
Still like it
Very good
Love Your Characers
I am enjoying your story so much, I just had to join and express my thanks for your efforts. Your characters are so real, I find myself anxiously looking forward to each chapter in their lives. You are doing an excellent job with this story, it is thoroughly enjoyable.
look for chapter 39
I think it will make a lot more sense after Chapter 39 (which is posted on my site www.peterschulman.com along with the first 38).
Good
Good, I was a bit put off by the last chapter. This one wrapped it up with a nice bow! Thanks!
need more!
I've been following the WHOLE story since chapter 15 or so ... is the whole thing finished yet? I want the whole thing!
Still good
Keep the chapters coming!
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