You should def make this into a series! Id love to know what happened next
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Anonymous12/12/10
omg, that was amazing! i love it!
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Anonymous12/12/10
Great!
I would love to read more in this story line. You have a great talent for writing. I just found one of your stories and then read everything you have posted thus far. I can't wait for the updates to the stories!!
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You should def make this into a series! Id love to know what happened next
omg, that was amazing! i love it!
Great!
I would love to read more in this story line. You have a great talent for writing. I just found one of your stories and then read everything you have posted thus far. I can't wait for the updates to the stories!!
this was a fun little piece (as it were) Surprised at the rating, should higher. I like your writing! The Ravens... not so much
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Great story, have you thought of ever reading one of your stories and posting it on the audio side...just a thought, keep up the hot stuff!
good story
A good, well written story. But since I live in PIttsburgh the one major flaw with it is the Ravens..lol
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