All Comments on 'The Transformed Man Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great work

Really well written. I love the idea of a search for someone who can keep up with the main character. There a a couple of stories about female sexual athletes taking one, or more studs, apart. Sexual Survivor and the Tanya Supertits series are two that spring to mind. I think you could do some really interesting stuff with this series. Looking forward to more installments

C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Chapter#4 ?

Great Story but it needs to be followed - up .

lets see what Tom and Paula can do to keep his Balls Drained.

desirelitdesirelitover 13 years agoAuthor
Keeping the balls drained

Sounds like I could make it into an action story, like Crank or something, where if his balls aren't kept drained.... never mind. :)

Glad you guys are enjoying the story. I love the idea of raw, crazy sex, without inhibitions or jealousy or the need to maneuver through complex innuendo even in established relationships.

greg2906greg2906over 13 years ago
Better Each Chapter!

5 Stars! Great work again! Love the angle that his ball juice addicts them instantly and makes them want to service him any way he sees fit! Great read!

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594196 months ago

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