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by vrosej1012/05/10

Nice!

Watch the end rhyme though. Too many and too obvious and an end rhyme can ruin the serious mood of a poem like this one (think it's something to do with limericks).

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by tantricjim12/05/10

To vrosej10

Thank you for your comment. I attempt to write poems on only rare occasions, and only on subjects on which I have an emotional attachment. I was unaware of the general rule you stated. But it is nice to know that someone at least found it pleasant to read.

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