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by SweetOblivion12/03/10

I like the slightly manic quality to this verse

And you alter the tempo well - not sure the short verses quite fit the style. They seem to break up the sense a little too much. 8 lines to a verse might have been better. M

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by fridayam02/13/11

A curious poem

the mixture of styles is intruiging. It doesn't quite come off--the rhythm slips now and then, but I enjoyed it very much.

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