by dawoolef
Good grammer, spelling and punctuation. It was just the story line that seemed unrealistic. I don't know of too many girls who would simply walk up to their Daddy one day and say,
"... I want to play with your cock," Ashley said as she put her hand high up on his thigh.
Then, even if that did somehow happen, a father replying so quickly,
When he finally found his voice, it was a hoarse whisper, "You realize that if anyone finds out about this we'll both be in trouble."
I still gave it 5 stars, but would have liked the story better with a better lead-in.
Gets to fuck his young daughter or stepdaughter, it makes a good story as long as there is a good outcum. Keep it up!
Please write another chapter! This story was very good and very hot!
That was a great first chapter! I hope you write more!
I wonder what happens if they are caught? Would his wife spank both of them? Now that would be hot!
Guess Brenda is whoring herself to the firm of lawyers while clueless cuck gets to play daddy