All Comments on 'I Love My Daddy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
The writing was alright

Good grammer, spelling and punctuation. It was just the story line that seemed unrealistic. I don't know of too many girls who would simply walk up to their Daddy one day and say,

"... I want to play with your cock," Ashley said as she put her hand high up on his thigh.

Then, even if that did somehow happen, a father replying so quickly,

When he finally found his voice, it was a hoarse whisper, "You realize that if anyone finds out about this we'll both be in trouble."

I still gave it 5 stars, but would have liked the story better with a better lead-in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Anytime an Older Guy

Gets to fuck his young daughter or stepdaughter, it makes a good story as long as there is a good outcum. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Next Chapter

Please write another chapter! This story was very good and very hot!

Naughtydad469Naughtydad469over 13 years ago
Very Good! MORE PLEASE!

That was a great first chapter! I hope you write more!

GizmorGizmoralmost 13 years ago
Daddy

It would be cruel if there is no more of this HOT story! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What Happens

I wonder what happens if they are caught? Would his wife spank both of them? Now that would be hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Guess Brenda is whoring herself to the firm of lawyers while clueless cuck gets to play daddy

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

1 star for lying tags

coolstrangeravenuecoolstrangeravenue2 months ago

in my reading, he's lying about the vasectomy

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