All Comments on 'A Week At Papaw's Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Keep up the amazing work!

This is an amazing story! I loved how He kept her on the brink of orgasm until He was ready to let her have it. As a Dom, I appreciate that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Developing well

I like the way this tale is developing & progressing.

Leah has all the hallmarks of the ideal suby slave, and I'm very interested to see how her life & training progresses.

Will her friends discover her secret? Will she fall in love with pawpaw? What does her future hold?

Look forward to the successive episodes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good and bad

No after care and a scene would never happen with a real Dom. Not being a Dom for 35 years but already in a day has a padded bench with restraints, fake. No trust build up fake. Having a collar and chain ready same issue 35 years of nothing. Other issues show this Story needs more research on the lifestyle If this one a dom and submissive. Or is this a sadist? Real girlfriends would never all leave a friend at another relatives house they just met. They would go late, someone would stay, they would

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I am back, been gone too long. I hope I am remembered at least a little bit. Life has moved on and so much has changed but it is slowly getting back to normal and better. I have 29 offerings with more on the way. I have met a large number of friends from these and other stor...

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