All Comments on 'Fantasy Island Getaway Prologue'

This was a story I was looking forward to. I am so glad you finished this. I'm glad everyone had a happy ending of some sort.

Thank you for finishing this story.

Well all I can say, another story by a true master of the word. I started to read with a little scepticism but I soon realised that you had another winner on the way, as all your stories have been. Well Done and Thank You.

Love the surprise ending

Great ending -

Ritchie was a big winner after all -

Good for all of them -

So Richie got Mimi pregnant all those years ago and had no idea that he was a father? I think it's time for her to lay off with the surprises, settle down and get married. After all, I think her daughter needs a father figure in her life. Of course Mimi should consider making use of her skills in the bedroom to provide her a younger sibling or two. Fair is fair after all.😎

That being said, as that other bloke said it would have been nice if Mimi had a baby bump of her own. And I thought a prologue was supposed to be what happened before, so wouldn't this have been more appropriately been called an epilogue? I know that last bit is a bunch of minor nitpicking but still a grand effort on your part. I'm giving you four stars.