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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Few lines...

Miss Lynn, there were few lines but they spoke volumes....wonderfully done....Beau

vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
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You get extra points on this one for brevity and conciseness (I'd imagine this is a skill transferred from other forms of writing). Brevity is often the heart of wit and here it adds punch.

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