All Comments on 'The Defiled Temple Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
love it

this is a really good story and the blending of world terms is such a nice touch. looking forward to more.

geiste4geiste4over 13 years ago

A great addition to a great story keep going. Thank you.

MrOzymandMrOzymandover 13 years ago
Nice story!

Sometimes it's the simple things in life that are the best. A story of salvation, development, and change. I love the story for what it is and how the characters are developing. Keep up the good work!

Jedi_KhanJedi_Khanover 13 years ago
Not bad so far

Interesting story. Pugward sure is an interesting character. I hope that there are more chapters to follow.

Sirens_CrySirens_Cryover 13 years ago
Fabulous!

Your story is brilliant! So original! I love that is is arousing as it is funny!!! Amazing work!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

its fuckingtastic

write more dude

cylinderlitcylinderlitover 11 years ago
amazing

plz keep it up! :)

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 9 years ago
Really enjoying this

Hmm. Second reading ... or this the third? Good stuff. Long sentences could use some commas to help break them up, but overall, a delight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Said this after chapter 1 but I'll say it again, I fucking love this imp.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
Love it!!

I love these characters!! The Imp is great and their innocent exploration of all things sexual is great! Keep writing!!

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