Bathrobe Mornings

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Nice story

This is a nice enough story. It could use just a pinch more of spice, either an antagonist, unplanned pregnancy, or some other motive event. As it proceeds now, it will be a pleasant story not unlike 1,000's of others.

Nice Start

You have a great start and have opened up the story enough that you have several different directions in which you can take your characters. It will interesting to see which direction you go. I look forward to chapter 2.

Yep bring on chapter 2

But maybe add something different, but nothing sad or depressing. There is enough sad stuff going on in real life.

There is nothing beautiful about incest

it's sick.

hot

Great opening. Can't wait for sister to get involved.

Keep going.

I like this story. I really want to see what happens with Heather. Please write another chapter.

4 stars

4 stars as an incentive to continue and try for a 5 star rating :-)
very much liked the way the story flows and look forward to reading the next chapters

wow

wow. can make any moral man also love this piece of artistic seduction. I am an old mom but wow, full marks!!!

to the 'it's sick' comment

kiss my ass you hypocrit. you read the whole story and, i am sure rubbed one out, then feel bad for liking the story, so it must be sick?!
get over it and admit it, you think you are sick. so deal with your own issues and stop coming to this site and leaving your comments. basically fuck off.

this story flowed and i can't wait for the next chapter, 5 stars.
nick

Excellent !

Your work study programe with your barely legal GF paid off . Your story was quite realistic and very hot . You must continue with parts 2 and 3 . Obviously he has to take care of his other daughter and then both together . Lucky Dad .

5 stars

Liked that the "act" didn't quite happen the first time around, and it took right up where they left off the next Saturday morning.

Yes, both Chapter 2 and 3 is a must. Geez, how old is the younger sister?

Incest Lovers :)

My sister and I come to Literotica for exactly this; quality. We loved this and we cannot wait for the next chapter! Fantastic, and very, very hot.

-Jack & meg:)

go for it!

bringing in Heather is a given. can more characters be added? just a suggestion of course, write your own story. you've done a damn fine job so far. 5 stars.
max52

great job

This is well written and wonderfully naughty I love it Just pls say those girls are on the pill. It would be hard to have much will power being around 2 hot hard body teenage girls constant teasing. His breaking point inevitable so now enjoy it. Keep it up I will be reading Thanks

So hot!

I love this story so much! I could come over and over reading about how her and her dad making love. I love your imagination and the way you write! Keep up the good work!

WONDERFUL!

Can't wait to read the next two chapters in this story! I enjoy your writing and the way that you develop your characters. Thanks for sharing!

Wow

That was amazing. Well, written and more believable than most of the other stories on here. Great stuff!

Pretty damned good.

Good Story, well written, very believeable, very erotic, excellent work. Just the reason people log onto here, spice and nice. Congraulations on a very good write. All 3 chapters were interesting. Keep up the good work, what about your ex girlfriend, how about a story on her?.....lol

SISTERS & DADDY

WELL THIS STORY COULD BE PART OF SOMEONES REAL LIFE VARY WELL WRITING SO FAR "LOVE IT" I THINK A LOT OF FATHER WISH THEY COULD DO THE SAME AS THIS GUY, SOME ARE JUST LUCKY, THIS IS SOMETHING MONEY CAN'T BUY,SO FAR YOU'VE GOT A 5 PLUS STARS I LIKE THE WAY THAT YOU HAVE THE SEX CUMING SLOW UNTIL THERE NO TURNNING BACK,,,KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK,I STARTING ON CHAPTER 2 NOW...............................'''R'''......... ...................

Wow

I wanna be your little girl.

I wanna be your baby girl too :) Maybe we can all share!

Amazing!

Very well written and the best orgasm instigator I've read in a long time.

Who the hell is Samantha?

Did you plagiarize this story and forget to change all the names?

@ the commenter who queried 'Samantha.'

Plagiarism is a serious allegation. Make sure you can back it up before making it. To lay such a charge frivolously brings into question everything this author has written or will ever write.
I write and post here, and on one occasion I decided to change the names of my characters half way through writing a story, with a similar result (although nobody thought I'd plagiarized the story, and it hasn't happened again because I learned and I now use the 'replace' function in Word). This, I would suggest, is a more likely reason for the error.
Plagiarism does happen, and in my opinion anyone guilty of such theft (for that is what it is) should be immediately and permanently banned from the site. But please be certain before making the accusation.

a HUGE F-U to the troll who accused me of plagarism

I write my own stories. Right at the beginning, the story states that Honey's name is Samantha, but no one ever calls her that.

So please, read the whole story. Or at least the beginning. Don't just skip to the first sex scene and then drop the "p" word.

To everyone else, thanks for all the great comments I very much appreciate them.

LOVE Honey !

Oh I LOVED the story and what a SLUT the young daughter is ! - - As it SHOULD be ! .... and even better, it looks like he will get to fuck both daughters ! ---- MORE Please.

Steve

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I absolutely loved it

it was crazy hot and arousing. Very well written. Simply Awesome. SO glad there's more of it! Keep up the good work

I loved it too.....

I thought it was a sweet, rather sexy story about what can happen in this world.
People cannot deal with so much of what occurs between humans. Compared to the hate, the exploitation and the cynical use of people this story is mild, its about a surprise and about love.

What is it about American's and their need to fuck their kids?

its not a fantasy unique to Americans

It's a common fantasy worldwide. It seems the bulk of the stories on here are written by American authors, but I also see a fair amount from the UK, Australia and India as well. If I could read in German, I'd probably see more from Germany and Austria. If I could read in French I'd probably see more from France, Belgium and Quebec, etc.

I get a lot of email from readers as well, and many of them are from the UK and Australia.

I don't actually have a daughter in real life, but these fantasies appeal to me both because of how forbidden they are, and also because of the deep emotional connection between the two characters. That's just my take of course.

Regardless, thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed the story.

TJ

simple, intimate sharing

I did not see a "slut" here; I saw two people who love each other and their mutual attraction got the best of them. True; they both recognized well in advance and could have stopped it. But the thing is; like the first time, once it's there, can you ever really put it away. I'm sure that it would be there until one of them dies. I do not believe that "sharing Love" is anywhere near as bad as society makes it; as a matter of fact I think that it's travesty that society has any say so over personal lives. There was no attempt on either part to hurt, disgrace, embarrass, etc... the other party; they simply wanted to act upon & share their natural feelings.

I haven't read the other parts yet; but since Heather "knows"; the girls have talked about it & therefore they staged this to happen, they want it to happen.

Thanks;
DKP

what can one say

it was so erotic felt like it was happening to me..cant wait for rest.

sex is great

Its sexy feeling in mornings

This why I read

Every once in a while you find an older story like this and the surprise makes it worth the time. Now I have to explore, the rest in this series, and look for others by the author.

Yep, rereading again myself for the ?th time :). Always enjoy a good short story!

Loved this story!

My 22-year old daughter and I sleep together and make love at least twice a day. We started just like the story does and just reading it made me so horny for my baby. I can't seem to get enough of my "lover" we spend as much time as we can loving on each other.

Beautifully written

I enjoyed this story so much and I'm looking forward to seeing how he gets together with Heather and then, hopefully, a daddy/daughter menage e trois. 5 Stars!