All Comments on 'A Traditional Wedding'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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I don't get it. Surely this isn't something you consider erotic. Just because it involves their genitalia and a copulation ceremony doesn't make it sexually erotic. Plus the fact that they have to have ASSISTANCE to have sex. Plus the fact that you illustrate no purpose whatsoever for this tradition. You have their dwelling 200 paces from anyone else, but ask people to come to you during sex. Why not build the home near others? The shaman is supposed to call the shots, but is drunk on his ass. The husband allows other men to put their hands on his new bride on their wedding night. This is something no culture willingly allows.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Totally STUPID.

Stopped reading some where into page 1.

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