All Comments on 'Pornworld 05: The Fuckable Feast'

You know, I liked your Pornworld tales so far, but you should proofread a little: there is a significant difference between "road" and "rode". I also don't understand why you couldn't have invented differing names for the girls - it would have made the text much more readable.

Wish you would continue, here or maybe on CHYOA if you want help.