All Comments on 'Naked on a Commuter Train'

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ShaggyladShaggyladover 13 years ago
Fab

Another erotic tease from the queen of the format. Looking forward to more from you. Shaggy

davion2308davion2308over 13 years ago
Nice

I enjoyed your teasing. You write well; keep it up!

cutiegirl4004cutiegirl4004over 13 years ago
Always enjoyable

Always a fun, teasing read!

rogerenjoyslookingrogerenjoyslookingover 13 years ago
Hot story

Nice story, maybe you'll do it for real one day and I'd love to be there to see you

B59001B59001about 13 years ago
A Great Tease

Entertaining story with a great climax.

GeorgieHGeorgieHover 11 years ago
Checking the timetables

As always, great fun and beautifully written - and very thrilling. Now I'm checking the timetables to see what time I can board the next train...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Mike

If I was that lad I wouldn't have got off at the station.

Love your stories looking forward to the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Turn on

Fuck that’s turned me on. Off to finger myself like the girl on the train

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I WONDERING IF THESE ARE FROM EXPERIENCE

CleevedreamsCleevedreams8 months ago

I wonder if you’re still on here writing stories. I’d love to hear.

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