by PacullaAnnia
Loved your story and would love to read sequel(s) to it at some point in the future as well.
That was an awesome story! Very well written and believable. Thanks for sharing.
You have a number of different things going on .. desire, wanting, insecurity, surprise just to name a few plus it's all rolled together in a neat story package that just makes me want to hopefully see a continuation of this ... please :)
Thank you for sharing this lovely, sexy story with us. I can hardly wait for your next one!
I'm completely in agreement with the recent posts. This is a very well written story. It is believable and hot! If there were errors in grammar or spelling I really didn't notice them. Please keep up the good work. More stories please!!
[Gualterio]
Wonderful set-up, great humanity, excellent prose, and well-done on the sex scenes
I loved this story because I am obsessed with the idea of watching my husband fuck other women right in front of me. My favorite fantasy involves 3 or 4 women having their way with him while I observe at close range, while pressing my trusty vibrator to my clit. I know, it sounds unusual, but its is my fantasy!
Wonderful writing, made me feel like I was there, my cock was at full attention the entire time....!
Awesome story, very hot. The scenario is totally realistic; I was reading in a public place and had to stop because I was getting a big hard-on! I can't wait to read the next installment.
One of my favorite stories on the site
Would I be brave enough
What a fun and very erotic story……… I would love to share a similar experience. You can email me at florida_beaches@aol.com
Well constructed w/ well developed interesting individual characters !! ; )
I dug it, I hkpe they get up to some more hijinks. Especially Lori. I'd like to see where that may go.
Another story I couldn't get past the opening paragraph. Only married 4 years and things had gotten stale in the bedroom ?
This is either a knock off of another story on Lit, or the author read the other one and added some to it. I had to skip to end and end paragraph, also. An ok story when I first read it, but it's old hat now.
Was better than most. Well written.
But I still feel there was a lost opportunity here.
Sara seemed to vacillate between being a sexual open and understanding wife and a jealous wife.
My real-life experiences in similar scenarios never had "jealousy" once the festivities started.
That was a real bummer in this story.
Asking her her husband to be totally nude for her friends was quite sexy. But then to get pissed of for what might be happening, was anti-climactic. Ergo: 3 stars instead of five.
stunning captivating.. 1st of urs ive read v v pleased 2 hav found u -> favourite of islandic00 amazed how u could dwell on such finely detailed narration of exquisitely sizzling action but still keep everything so fresh enthralling without becoming ott outstanding
It's easy to see how this would be the prize winner! You had my cock hard and the jerking furious from the middle of the first page. This was STUPENDOUS. I can only wish it ever happened to me.