All Comments on 'Inches Away'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

This story is hot.

imgameimgameover 13 years ago
Well Written

A well written story. Kinda feel bad for Jack though..the whole unfulfilled expectation thing. Let me know if you ever write another story for these characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Seriously hot

Hope there will be more parts!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Indubitably red hot.

It seems as if he was caught before this; is there a prequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What relationship?

She humiliates him, he leaves and never goes back. That's the great thing about girlfriends. They're SO easy to dump and it costs you nothing. Stupid story.

Sub_HubbieSub_Hubbieabout 9 years ago
Brilliant

A great story well written. Very hot.

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