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A Woman and Her Sister Share a Love

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by Anonymous

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by Abdulbenthere12/11/10

I thought the term was "intergender"

I thought the term was "intergender"

Nice story, I like your dialog, didn't find it hokie or trite.

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by Anonymous12/12/10

win much?

Spelling, Grammar, and basic structure issues aside...

its fucking win! I have always loved Futanari storys/manga... something so fucking hot about it!

A few times I have asked those who said Futanari was nasty, why they hated it when they where ok with watching a FULL BLOWN MALE fuck a female, but when it was 2 females, one who was born bi-gender, fuck or have sex, why only then was it nasty... if you cant guess, he didnt reply and actually /quit IRC...

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by burningpapercrow03/19/11

great! more.

This is a good story, but i wish you had drawn it out a little more. That being said, I can't wait to read more.

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by Ripley7807/01/11

Enjoyable

I think you could use a little more practice with your writing, but the story itself is incredibly hot and sexy.

Looking forward to the next chapter

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by Pantieswhere11/24/11

:o

The beginning was rather confusing for me.. To many flips of "I" Otherwise im glad to see more authors writing about futas. :) Keeep on it! :D

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by Anonymous03/28/12

>.

You ass holl how can you end it rite when it's getting good. ;(

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by PryoHound07/09/12

Nice

I love this, you are a little creul for cutting it there but i like the story. The sister and her younger futa sis. I love futanari so i like this since it has two things i like. Incest and girls with dicks.

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by CookieCutter11/22/13

About Time!

Futanari are a really interesting sub-sub-genre of erotica to me (and others), but you never see it outside of manga. This sounds like a good beginning, and I hope you keep up the story as well as the level of detail.

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by dastardlydick12/03/16

Good start

I liked the concept of the story but in places found it difficult to read. Spell and grammar checker should help or maybe an editor. Don't give up keep going

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