All Comments on 'Winter's Heat'

This poem is what I so love about words; the way they flow, the imagery it brings. Please continue to write more lovely poetry!

You have quite the way with words. What a beautiful poem. It expresses love and passion so perfectly.

Five, but I would prefer leaving it at this:

A desperate murmur,

a pleading sigh.

You kiss my lips,

I close my eyes.

You put yourself

between my thighs.

I touch you there...

I feel you rise.

We ride the waves

of lovers' cries.

We feel reborn—

We feel we die.