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by Anonymous

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by Corpse_rider06/18/11

Or: RSVP

Good mind control short story, but felt a little short-changed at the lack of a sex scene at the end of the story - just when things were hotting up too. Huh!

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by Anonymous09/29/12

Hmmm

Well, at least she didn't have 36DDD breasts.

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by Anonymous12/29/14

Holy shit.

It wouldn't surprise me if you put your readers under minor hypnosis with your writing style. It's bloody incredible.

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