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by JukeboxEMCSA
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Corpse_rideralmost 13 years agoOr: RSVP
Good mind control short story, but felt a little short-changed at the lack of a sex scene at the end of the story - just when things were hotting up too. Huh!
Anonymousover 9 years agoHoly shit.
It wouldn't surprise me if you put your readers under minor hypnosis with your writing style. It's bloody incredible.
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