Getting Caught

Tongue in cheek humor at its best

It's fun to see someone with such a twisted sense of justice write a good yarn

I think this was one of the better revenge stories. I hate it when the characters do violent things to get back at the other person. Revenge is best if you leave them and hit them in their pockets.

Very funny

An original way to seek revenge with plenty of interested spectators!

Good Read***

Thanks for sharing. Short but sweet.

Love it

Normally I like works that have a plot & some character development - a back story if you will; this is actually my first Flash Story

A little humorous revenge is always good and this quickie hits on cylinders - it flows & is easy to ready & I love the turn of the screw at the end

THX

G

Justice prevails

I look forward to your future "flash story" production. Thanks for a fun read with an appropriate outcome.

almost too short

but, as in the three bears,
it was not too short, or too long,
but just right.
; )
.

Enjoyable

A lot of content, twists and turns in a nice short story. Great job, really enjoyed it.

Oh yeah!

Hell of a first effort! Good job!

Loved it

Short, sweet, excellent!

Loved it as well

I join the many other admirers of your skill at wringing perfection out of the minimum space allotted by a short story format. You are a most skilled writer.

Very good....

Short, but to the point...

The Best

This was worthy of more than 5 stars.

Flash story at its very best.

And what a unique way to BTB. Although since she was cheating with half the world you would think she might have been a tad more careful about her planned revenge, knowing full well that she was cheating with multiple people. Well played Bob!

You are not only old Hideki, but senile to the point of mental disease !

Also you have NO writing skill whatsoever ! Obviously "1*" you deserve.

apologies & thanks

sorry that you have to put up with idiocy of some peoples comments
grateful that you don't delete the vitriol & trash
thanks , for sharing your writing with us
......
a very clever , well written , ultra short flash story.
and a very well deserved 5 stars from me

hello

Must say a fine one love to read that

I had it pegged from the start, but...

I still liked it.

but where was....

The start of it was Grace getting revenge on Jason.
From his reaction he was cheating on Grace.
But he was not on any of the video.

So where was her revenge?

by Tw0Cr0ws

but where was....

The start of it was Grace getting revenge on Jason.
From his reaction he was cheating on Grace.
But he was not on any of the video.

So where was her revenge?

Better read the end again Tw0Cr0ws...

"Frank clicked a third time, and then it was Frank's boss going down on me."
Jason is Frank's boss!

TRUE LIFE SHARON

For real true details of an actual serial cheating wife visit Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com. 50ish grandmother and college instructor in Helena Montana. She lost that job because of details on Facebook. While being involved in at least two extra-marital relationships she coerced one of her students into sexual relationship.
Tattooed-blk widow, purple rose-breast-implanted and penchant for degrading sex. Wanted golden shower on clit, stuck tongue in student's asshole and licked it-her idea-begged to be called a whore, wanted ''Take that bitch!!'' facial, and loved bringing cream filled panties home to panty sniffing husband.
One time she had lover rip panties and bra off her during sex. She had to teach class afterwards. Stood in front of class obviously braless under thin tight sweater and cum running fown her legs. She wrote lover she got chills feeling his seed ooze down and knowing the students in front row could see it.

1*

couldn't understand a damn thing, sorry.

1*

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THE MARTYRS FOR A LONG TIME SUFFER

but when its self inflicted, who cares, TK U MLJ LV NV

Excellent Story

I noticed that a number of commenters gave this story a one. These anonymous are obviously on the lower side of the IQ scale! They are probably rednecks who voted for Donald Trump. If they can't understand this story maybe they should go back to reading their comic books.