Getting Caught

Great story.

Those sitting in a glass cage should always be carefull and not throw stones!! I gave it a 5.

Good

I guess that revenge is sometimes best served while your sitting down. A good fun quick read.

Sweet

My what a tangled web we weave when we attempt to deceive. more twist than a curly fry. cleaver, very cleaver, Short and sweet. nice Job!

Hilarious!

This story just made my day.

Brilliant!

Hoisted on her own petard.

This was only short

And well-constructed, and thought through thoroughly, though my one sticking point is ' word choice '.
Voice recognition software, if that's what you're using, still is not good enough, maybe never will be.
Three homophones and one misguided apostrophe. not a lot, but this was just one page.

A very very good read nevertheless, and in the tradition of HDK, the twist is worth it :)

Cheers and Thanks,
Kilroy

You are no flash in the pan!!!!

Great concept, well written story-----thanks.

Well executed!

You, my friend, have grown leaps and bounds as a writer since your first--and still very good--submission.

Keep up the great work!

Very Impressed

You just became one of my favorite authors. Well Down

Loved it. Well done.

Some of Jason stuff didnt make sense. The evil-wife here was cheating with Jason, we know this because it was revealed in the last video. So why did she turn around and think to herself " oh Jason must have been cheating on grace?". She knows he was since it was with her.

Also grace doesn't get to serve papers on Jason? This is her payback time too, so you should have added more actions and dialog from grace to the tale.

I really did enjoy it.

Awesome turn around

I was wondering WHY Sharon was so convinced that Frank was cheating on her. Now I know, cheaters always project their bad behavior on everyone else. Of course the breadth of Sharon's betrayal is great and all the players were there to confront her. Looks like she isn't going to have any friends left since she is fucking all their husbands. The guys won't want her for anything other than a fuck since they all see how loose she is. Very nice short work. A bitch got exactly what she deserved.

Finally!!

A Quintessential Loving Wives story, without 10 pages of expounding on trust issues, infidelity, forsaking all others, and the details of cancelling bank accounts, etc.
Short, sweet, and just plain (no not Bob), but Excellent!!

More

What can I say but - "Ditto", to all the good remarks.
Write more!
Thanks!!!

Job well done

it may be a 'Flash' story, but done well. damn, i miss Papatoad's stories.

5 stars.

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Great little story

Sure there were some small holes here and there, but overall excellent!

Cool

It was a zippy little tune.

Brilliant!

Well written, short and to the point. Amazing final twist of the blade I mean go for the jugular! Ummmmm.... Pun intended! LOL.

Can I join the Misogynist Club?

Oh super...

GREAT FLASH

Short, (not so) sweet and quite creative. Well done! I look forward to future submissions.

Personally I thought it was a good twist (^_^)

It might have been done before, but if so I've not ever seen it. I laughed when I got to the end and realized that the two spouses who were cheated on both got their revenge on the ones who were cheating on them. (^_^)

Nice twist.

-Risq

Nice

This one made me smile. Short, concise, and to the point. I liked it!

Thank you and keep writing.

Great

This is like Judo, you let your opponent do all the work! Had me laughing

I liked it Well written

Nice twist, I thought it would be more typical but you turned it around well done. Definite worth read!

Well Done

Turn about is fair play!

Flash On!!

Short & to the point. I loved it! All the glee before the game is played is almost always a mistake.
Thank you.

Nice Smooth Flash Story

No excess element and no way that anyon could cry wimp! Well yes if he wanted to spend time as a guest of the state then he could have had a nice public burning of the witch, but ---- I wonder if Grace even knew what was going down?

Fun story. I liked it.

Gary.

Loved this story

Very cleverly written with wonderful twists. Loved it!

Very well done. Thumbs up. Hehehe.

Nice story.

Well done.

Excellent

Excellent and short and sweet

One day a mouse Roared.

If ever a mouse roared loader than a loin this is it... Thanks a lot. love this story.

Nice...

Hahaha... Nice.... totally unexpected. Good work as always, but I am patiently waiting for more of the Contract. hint hint.

John

Ha!

Nicely done :)

touche

A nice twist with multiple divorces and collateral lawsuits for alienation of affection. I guess infidelity are the grounds here lol
A lesson for her, you can outsmart yourself.

GreatJob

liked the ending thanks for the work

REALLY NICE REVENGE KEEP WRITING

Thanks

Good story and good ending thanks for the entertainment. Please write some more along this line.

Really a very good story.

Ignore anon's stupid remark. Undoubtably this person loves the wimp cuckold husband type of story. Speaks volumes of this person's character.

Good Job!

Liked it but am really pissed off at some of the comments

Attacking an author for his/her story is so juvenile. Comments on the plot or characters are acceptable but attacks on the author are not. If you don't like the story say so and move on. It is after all A STORY. It reminds me of some young asshole with his hat on backwards giving me the finger when I tried to point out that the passenger seat belt was draging on the street. You can lead a horse......... Thanks OH. I appreciate the effort you put into all your stories. Jim

That is my kind of story.

I rated it 4**** and almost rated it 5***** and would have if it was longer. However, it was just to short for the highest rating.

Poor Sharon! She went from cloud nine to the pits of Hell before she switch emotions. Frank set Sharon up; however, in fact, she set herself up. In any event, I believe everyone deserves a second chance. Therefore, after the divorce, if not before, I would advise Sharon to move to another city where she is not so well known. That way she can leave her past behind and perhaps get remarried and be good little wife.

DWmoroncok please shut up

give that hole in your face time to heal

DWmoroncuck - Just shut the fuck up!!

I hate your fucking guts you fag.

Now, the story. Nicely done! I can't believe I missed this little gem. I will be looking for more of your work!

5 stars

Good without violance revenge story.

What a Hoot

Excellent short story. I don't give very many 5 star ratings but I did for this one.

Thanks and write more!

A COMPLETE STORY

in short form, catching, payback & retaliation, No time for remorse. TK U MLJ LV NV

Oh Yeah

How dumb can a person be? I've seen stupidity but this takes the proverbial cake. Trying to catch your husband one time when you've been screwing everyone else?
Hilarious.

I really enjoyed that.

Short, neat and complete. It was also a lot of fun!

Very clever

His wife was a slut. He knew it. He knew she was going to try to cut his balls off. In the end she fucked herself. Beautiful irony!