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Definitely worth the extended wait
Congrats on wrapping up the overseas adventure. Maybe Chris could be a cameo in the house? Another woman could stir some things up
My Favorite Story
This is an incredible story. I love the characters and the adventures. Please keep this going, it is just too good to end.
Another good chapter
Ana Isabel has to visit! Keep up the good work.
Thanks
Thank you for this story. The love the characters share is a joy to read, please continue to nurture the relationship between Debbie, Beth and Jack.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Amazing as always
I hope this series never ends.
The Best Story I Have Read
Great work, can't wait for the next chapter.
I wana trade places
But I'm stuck in reality damn it
Keep it cumming!
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Man this is one of the best series of stories I have read and at 62, believe me I have read a few. Well done, please keep this series going, it has been a delight to read it all.
Best Regards
Popeye Oz
Excellent as Usual..
Love the series, am especially interested in the growing possessiveness between our gallant Hero and Debbie.. I think its time that Debbie got pregnant!! just my 2 cents, any suggestions from other readers???
~
Gary Andrews (garyandrewsbodyguard@yahoo.com)
Excellent work.
I've been enjoying this series for quite some time now, and when I looked it up out of nostalgia recently, finding out there were updates- and so MANY updates as well- was absolutely splendid! Each of them is well worth the reading, and I look forward to the next one in particular. (This character development for Jack is very interesting, I can hardly wait to see where you go with it.)
Thank you so much for writing these, and I hope you continue until you're satisfied with the story entire.
please
Please keep this story going
Well written
I noted one anomaly in you story. At one point you say Jack is fluent in Spanish because he lived in South America for 4 years and later you refer to his Spanish as being clumsy. Not a criticism, just letting you know your readers are paying attention to details.
Your writing style keeps the readers interest and you might even consider looking into having some of your work published.
I have lived where you live but have given up the rush, rush, traffic of the DFW area and moved back to OKC. Still busy as ever even at 74 but life moves somewhat slower here. cdn405@yahoo.com
The Royal Connection
Great story with and elegant twist at the end for a simple 2 years out of school engineer. Carry on and satisfy your loyal readers and fans. This is much more than a porn story, Well Done!!!
GREAT JOB
Started the read two days ago , loved the whole thing thoroughly, great job !!!
Just surprised that the kids are so "absent" from anyone's comments, affection etc...
This became my favorite story...
Romantic with all the eroticism one could desire. Please continue the saga for a while. Thank you.
Third readthrough.
I just finished my third read of this series, and enjoyed it just as much as the first two. Is there an ETA for the next chapters?
Fantastic story
Just finished reading the story and it was totally fantastic... hope there are at least 26 more chapters to this story... the girls going to spain would be great.
Fantastic
Best series of stories I've read on here and I've read a lot believe me !
Keep going please
Just started reading this and finished reading all chapters in a day. What happened in 2011. 2 postings in 2011 when you were so prolifc in the past. Please continue with this excelent story.
Excellent!
An absolutely beautiful story! Keep it up!
You drew me in
This series has been well written so far. Now you have so many loose ends hanging, you can't not write. I'll be interested to see how you resolve all of this. Keep writing, please.
GREAT, but ending..?
This is like a horse race. Almost all horses are named Jack, Jack Off, Jack's Boner, etc. All jockys are naked females named Beth, Debbie, etc. So fat it's a 25 furlong race, but the end is not in sight. PLEASE GET US TO THE FINISH LINE !!
More please
There are so many threads to be followed with this brilliant story. The Major visits America, Amie gets accepted as a full partner, Chris visits the house of lust, Debbie gets pregnant,...... Please continue.
More
Please add more chapters and or finish the series
please write more...I'm totally taken by this story, I need more!
write more
write more
MAYBE NOT ROYALLY
but definitely a member of the royals. TK U MLJ LV NV
Lef Hanging
More finish what you got us in to
Please
Please finish out this story line it is amazing
Whore
She feels guilty about betraying her husband, not to mention her children and the next moment, she is screwing Jack. Has she absolutely no morals or what ?
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