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Short & Sweet
I love it when the good guys win, a little formulaic but a nice read none the less.
Not bad.
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Good job
Like someone else said, short and sweet. Good job!
new Category
we should ask lit admins to add new category somting like revenge or stroke story for this type as good as think it is also nothing new, had seen it before, its not bad to use some already used stuf but to use it as like it is, well you could have lengthen it, with more details. to make it qualify for LW, or you could have put it in Humor cat.
This one was fun
I guess he showed Yvonne to be the slut he thought she was. Wait until Peter sees his email. One little weak spot in the story is the disclosure that Yvonne got bored with her marriage to Robert after 8 years, yet they were married for 12, so by implication she was cheating for 4 years. Since Robert divorced Yvonne after discovering her giving a blow job to her boss, Peter, he must have learned that she was cheating for the last 1/3 of their marriage. If that's true, how could he accept her statement that the BJ she gave Peter in his office was "just a stupid mistake?" Either it was one of many, many "stupid" mistakes over 4 years' time, or there is a contradiction in the story. I don't know the legal implications regarding filming someone naked without their knowledge -- presumably Robert could do some serious jail time and be permanently labeled as a sex offender in real life -- but in a fantasy (revenge) story it certainly feels good for us guys to win one, for a change. Thanks for writing.
less reading?
Perhaps if DQS1 is not happy with the story he should spend more time finishing his and less time reading others ? !
Good Job
It's like I always say: Payback is a bitch.
In this case the husband was the pay master.
Good read
Likebob . . .
Your comment was appropriate but for the wrong commenter! The person who commented was not DQS1 (danielqsteel1). It was an "imposter" with the name, DanieIQSteel1 (IQ in the middle of the name) and the capital I looks like an "L" so one thinks it is DanielQSteel1, but it is actually someone else who cleverly used a trick to make us think he/she is DQS1 the author. Click on the name and look at the bio -- there are no stories but the name is properly spelled out with the "IQ" in the middle of it. The real DQS1 is definitely slow to add more chapters, but that is a different individual, I think.
(DQS take note) formulaic, maybe; but, it at the very least was complete.
Like it. It matters not a whit if you expect it to head in the right direction, and it does. It was short and to the point. Done and put to bed while being a very pleasant read, too.
Thank you very much for sharing this with us.
Good Story!
Good Story! Nice payback! Thanks for sharing it.
I liked it
I would love a part ii when the asshole boss husband gets the email and throws her slut ass out! Payback is wonderful.
I Don't Like It!
It's the wimp revenge! A low life that wins nothing. It's a Loser-loser-loser situation.
Enjoyed it!
Good old fashion revenge - outstanding!
A Rare Good One
Finally, a no wimp story, where the husband obviously divorced his wife the moment he discovered her infidelity.
He discovers that she had been unhappy for the last four years of their marriage, you left that out, and married her boss - very fitting.
I don't think he was a low life to get his revenge, he earned that right and she gave it to him on a platter...who says revenge can't be sweet.
Obviously, I liked it, could have been a little longer - it was just soooooo enjoyable!!!
Thanks!
Great Story
It is a great revenge story, short sweet and to the point.
Doesn't payback feel good, huh?
Nicely done!
It was
a decent story writing wise , and had sympathy for the guy at the beginning but that quickly faded . No character in this story to like . The guy moans and whines about being cucked , he didnt like it , but seems to have no ethics about doing it himself . His sense of entitlement is as bad as hers is . It was never mentioned if she was lying to her boss at the time it happened , which for a self absorbed bitch like that is quite possible . A good short story , keep writing but again , all the characters were scum with not enough information in the story for the reader to support any of them to any large degre .
Revenge served cold! Or maybe with the sex it was hot.
Well written story.
Sex with the ex happens more than people think.
I liked how he turned lemons into lemonade!
Good One
Now thats an eye for an eye. Or is that a pussy for a pussy? I don't think the video is going to go over well.
Great story
What a wonderful build up and ending...using an economy of words. Very clever...very well written. Great short story.
Brilliant!
Great story, best short story ever.
Good little story.
Quick and simple. I hope her husband enjoyed the turnabout.
Good story; but one complaint
you made Yvonne too fuckng stupid. Not only did she not see it coming, she's too stupid to appreciate the fact that she just got fucked.
hahahah
that was fucking awesome! he got some closure and a nice dose of revenge. unlike the dbag before me, i like the fact that she was borderline retarded and unrepentent (superficially she might be sorry but that doesnt mean shit) was great because unlike those stupir RAAC stories, most guys (and girls) wouldnt be dying to get back together. kudos.
Just Outstanding!
No quarter given! I loved it. Five Stars!
NICE!
A very good follow-up to your first story which I was a big fan of. I look forward to reading more of your writing works in the future.
Good revenge fuck
I like it that he didn't have to hang around for two years putting up with her to finally get even. In and out and done. The thing is, his ex is an airhead. She probably won't get why he was so mean to her.
My opinion is
there just ain't much here. Not enough for me to vote on. Sorta like a story on a yellow sticky note.
Does he really have his revenge?
I wonder if he feels better now, or does his hate for her still burn his ass.
The storyline wasn't one that I agree with but the story was well written.
Sorry to the rest of you voters
Didn't like this one at all.
weak as piss
Sluts are too much fun to waste, you should have shared her around ...
Pleasant Light Read
For the end of the evening!
Good
I thought it was rather neat. The shit is about to hit the fan in her life. Good. A nice read. Thanks . Jim
Now She Will Understand
She is just a piece of ass.
The saying is, what goes around cums around...
By the time she gets home, she'll know it's true. Is that payback or revenge?
A Nice turn of events
Well, what's good for the goose is good for the gander....video link was a nice touch.
Their is a difference...
The difference between a bitch and whore,is a whore charges money. Well in this case, both men should know the sad, but true difference. She didn't charge either, her ex or soon to be ex. Hell, if they wanted a "bitch" maybe they should have bought a DOG.
Well, finally a tale where the wronged husband gets some payback.
Hurrah!
I like!!
Short and sweet. Thanks for a good read.
HAHAHAHA
That will do nicely !!
...ain't payback a bitch ?...
Huh?
He gets his revenge by causing untolded pain an misery on some poor guy he doesn't even know by cheating on his wife. Real classy guy this one
Read the story again
Fighting41, she was cheating with her boss which she married afterward. You seriously lack reading skills.
Nice one Likegoodwine. I like the getting even stories.
nice touch, video
fast foward, rewind, slow motion.....still adds up to a cheating slut 5 stars
IN GAMEMANSHIP
EVERY BODY GETS A TURN.....NOW ITS MINE. TK U MLJ LV NV
BRILLIANT!
Perfection in Pose
Ha ha...
Payback is a MOFO!! 5 stars
Short and sweet
letting it go is good but getting even is alot better.
He is no wimp!
Nice harmonics, here. She really was taken to the cleaners here in a clever counter stroke....
I Like
What better revenge that cheating with your ex-wife making her current husband the cuck that she made him originally, Then passing the word to get her screwed. Good revenge. I like
HA
Benedict Arnold
rudely buggered cornhole, lustily smoked cock, betrayed!
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