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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone12/11/10

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Reading words
formatted
just like this

Makes me feel
like I'm on
Steroids

Taking
a shit

Don't do it

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by jthserra01/03/11

A little better...

"As shards of
light explode
behind my
eyes
my body
implodes
sending
my orgasm
out in waves"

this is poetry... this is showing, the rest just narration.

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by nonnie01/04/11

All are different and unique

Great job I thought you did a great job of expressing yourself to the reader. Not ALL poems are wrote the same if they were they would be boring! Everyone has thier own way of writing poetry that fits them and I think this is a good way as any to share it!

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by bulltlr01/04/11

Thank You all....

I am a strong believer in the idea that everyone is entitled to their own opinion!

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