Unfortunately the wife is a moron as well as a slut. Husband says he has to go into work for an emergency, which is well within his job description and she decides that is a reason to fuck someone else? Then come home and rub his face in it? She's an idiot. He's well rid of her and her bitch sister but it was too easy because she's so stupid.
I have to agree, this can't be a Just Plain Bob story! We love JPB because we hate the storyline. Everyone needs someone to rag on. :-) The writing was rather tight and lucid. But I never said JPB was a bad writer. But the story was so compact and believable.
The Guy refused to lay down and be pissed on.
By the wife or her stupid sister who now has to put up with a Miserable sister after breaking their Marriage up.
You write stories that piss off so many people, if reading the comments is anything to go by and then you turn it all around. Not only that, but you have mastered the short story genre which is one hell of a feat. And then you call yourself 'Just Plain Bob'.
You must have an interesting, wicked, devious, moral, immoral and kinky mind ... Thank God! Either that or you have an understanding about life, people and relationships that puts mine to shame ... as I've written before ... thanks for writing.
One thing thought, it would be nice to see a second chapter. Maybe the divorce with the husband (soon to be ex-) getting revenge on her and her sister.
I know this is kinda your style. But personally your brevity in the stories is somewhat frustrating and leaves us half full. Pity that I have to go to other writers to read conclusions to your stories! Most cannot write as well as you. Really quite a shame
The story is not too short and was a very enjoyable read. Unfortunatly in the background are the "kids"; only mentioned once but will be again in the future as he has no legal proof. Too bad as although I applaud his decision, it will cost him. Thanks JPB. Top marks. Jim
and you can't fix stupid. goes for the wife and commenter who gave it a 1 because it had old people in it, missed a good story and if you are lucky enough you may get to be old people some day.
Thaks JPB good story.
"I was mad". Geez what an excuse to be a slut. Next time she'll cheat because he didn't put the dishes away. Oh that's right, there won't be a next time. There are not enough words to express what a moronic cunt she is.
I have seen women cheat for exactly this reason. Not enough attention, so they fuck someone else and they think it will make their guy fight for them - wrong!
fairy tale ending. American jurisprudence being what it is, he'll pay through the nose. I hope the kids are older so he doesn't have to pay child support for too many years.
Not 5 *, because he only divorced her...She, the sister and the lover should have been punished....
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Anonymous09/09/14
Right what crap he cannot throw her out that's the law.
Sound good but no reality . A divorce will cost him a bundle, 50/50 split , alimony , child support. No way he can get the kids , what she did was wrong but he will get raped by the courts. He really loses in this .
English
Good story, short but good
Well done Bob, I enjoyed the read. Thanks
A great flash story!!!!
Has it all but descriptive sex! Again, Bravo!
Can the real JPB step forward.
Well done. 5 stars.
Great! 5 Stars!
Well done! Too bad he wasted 18 years on the whore.
Dumb wife
Unfortunately the wife is a moron as well as a slut. Husband says he has to go into work for an emergency, which is well within his job description and she decides that is a reason to fuck someone else? Then come home and rub his face in it? She's an idiot. He's well rid of her and her bitch sister but it was too easy because she's so stupid.
JPB story?
cant be.
Nawwwww. Can't be!
I have to agree, this can't be a Just Plain Bob story! We love JPB because we hate the storyline. Everyone needs someone to rag on. :-) The writing was rather tight and lucid. But I never said JPB was a bad writer. But the story was so compact and believable.
Who wrote this really??
Loved It
The Guy refused to lay down and be pissed on.
By the wife or her stupid sister who now has to put up with a Miserable sister after breaking their Marriage up.
Loving wife story?
No likely, just a dark, unhappy story with no plot or reason
How do you do it?
You write stories that piss off so many people, if reading the comments is anything to go by and then you turn it all around. Not only that, but you have mastered the short story genre which is one hell of a feat. And then you call yourself 'Just Plain Bob'.
You must have an interesting, wicked, devious, moral, immoral and kinky mind ... Thank God! Either that or you have an understanding about life, people and relationships that puts mine to shame ... as I've written before ... thanks for writing.
Good
Short and to the point. Looks like another commenter did not like to read about how it turns out most of the time.
Yet another well-written short story by JPB
This gal was lucky to not have been kicked out many years before. She did not know anything about her husband,,,,
Yea, short, sweet and a man with balls, yea!
it's nice to kick bitches out.
Good simple story.
The wife wanted to push, but didn't know she pushed too far.
Good flash story
Concise and too the point. Our worthy husband can probably upgrade after the divorce.
totally amazing
Bob actually knows how to write a coherent story.
short and to the point
This is a very impressive quickie story. The wife is no more in -what- ~19 hours? Lets have more of these short stories.
loved it!
no cuck here
Nice
One thing thought, it would be nice to see a second chapter. Maybe the divorce with the husband (soon to be ex-) getting revenge on her and her sister.
Yeah!
This was a good, quick story. Thanks.
Please read my "The Principal of the Matter" to see a similar situation with a happier ending.
I'm also writing the Sister Golden Hair Delight series.
Part 2??????
Another great story Bob. Short and too the point Just begs for a Part 2.
Always enjoy your stories
Wow Bob
That was short and sweet, so this will be as well.
Good work, well done and worth the 5
Amanda
Mmmmmmm
Very tastey.
Your stories are still way too short
I know this is kinda your style. But personally your brevity in the stories is somewhat frustrating and leaves us half full. Pity that I have to go to other writers to read conclusions to your stories! Most cannot write as well as you. Really quite a shame
short
A little short, but sooooo much better than most of your recent stories. Gave it a 4 for marked improvement.
One word!
Goooooood!!!!!!!!!
I don't care how long it was...
It told the story and I cared about him. She screwed up and ended what could once have been a good marriage. For once I liked a JPB story.
Thanks.
I agree
The story is not too short and was a very enjoyable read. Unfortunatly in the background are the "kids"; only mentioned once but will be again in the future as he has no legal proof. Too bad as although I applaud his decision, it will cost him. Thanks JPB. Top marks. Jim
What a wake up call............
Neat,concise,to the point - WTF ?
As ever in some of these cases - one person is swayed into believing what another person says - without checking !! FFS !!
It's more true than you can believe.......sadly.
SHE chucked their marriage into the garbage - not him.
Thank you for a good but hurtful story.
Just another old folks story.
Old folks are not sexy so I gave it a 1 and stopped reading when I read married 18 years.
Some people are stupid ...
and you can't fix stupid. goes for the wife and commenter who gave it a 1 because it had old people in it, missed a good story and if you are lucky enough you may get to be old people some day.
Thaks JPB good story.
to mike2710
I was just about to write those exact words when I read your's. Right on and let's hope he doesn't get lucky. LOL Sorry Bob
IF THEY COULD ALL BE THAT EZ
cut and dried and with a bow. TK U MLJ LV N V
excellent
way to go - another hit. gave u a 5.
Tremendous
Didn't take any shit from the cheating wife. She wanted someone else now she can have him forever. No wimp here. Real men still exist.
OH YEAH
Follow up story please!
Really like it. Short and sweet. Wouldn't mind a follow up though.
Not JPB's job!
Following up on a story is not JPB's job. His job description includes not being able to create appropriate endings.
Sort of curious
Exactly what follow up is needed? She cheated. He's divorcing her. She doesn't want to.
So...here is your follow up
"You have been served."
"I don't wanna! I LUVS YOU."
"Good bye my dear!"
"This court finds the divorce decree acceptable. Case ajourned."
Satisfied?
Liked it!
Gave it a 5! I like reading what a real man would do with cheating whores! I know how it feels and I know how good it feels to dump them!!!
Alternative ending
He files an alienation of affection lawsuit on both her sister and Stan?
Stupid Woman
"I was mad". Geez what an excuse to be a slut. Next time she'll cheat because he didn't put the dishes away. Oh that's right, there won't be a next time. There are not enough words to express what a moronic cunt she is.
#2 2 OUT OF 3 GET THEIR JOLLIES
this will be a readers choice and that aint bad. TK U MLJ LV NV
Real
I have seen women cheat for exactly this reason. Not enough attention, so they fuck someone else and they think it will make their guy fight for them - wrong!
if you have to fight for your wife
the battle is already lost.
LIVE AND LET LIVE
But not with me, TK U MLJ LV NV
A nice
fairy tale ending. American jurisprudence being what it is, he'll pay through the nose. I hope the kids are older so he doesn't have to pay child support for too many years.
Stupid
Stupid is stupid does.
Right
Stupid idiot cheating cunt. Now she can hang with her bitch sister. Stupid is as stupid does.
Damn
Not 5 *, because...
Not 5 *, because he only divorced her...She, the sister and the lover should have been punished....
Right what crap he cannot throw her out that's the law.
Sound good but no reality . A divorce will cost him a bundle, 50/50 split , alimony , child support. No way he can get the kids , what she did was wrong but he will get raped by the courts. He really loses in this .
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