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The Phony Excuse

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/14/14

09/08 commentor is so full of shit..

that the asshole is likely a cheating low life two bit cum sucking shit licking idiot. Is that clear enough.

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by Tootight111/02/14

good

loved it.. yes there will be consequences, but at least he wont have to worry about where she's been every day.

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by Anonymous12/30/14

Anon on 9/8 should eat shit and die..

and make the world a better place. Stupid asshole!

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by Anonymous02/19/15

A terrible accident...

...is what needs to happen, according to anony-mouse on 9/8. It is obviously the cheapest and easiest way out.

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by Drbeamer333302/23/15

Loved it

a great flash story. Five stars.

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by tazz31702/23/15

IS A FAUX-PHONY EXCUSE

better than a made up one that can be proven. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Goodhue05/09/15

Nice to See That ,For Once,The Guy isn't a Cucky Wimp!

Time to plan a well-timed,and disguised,accident in which the twat wife and her bitch sister get splattered in a 90 mph car wreck!

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by Tootight105/15/15

very nice

great story, unfortunately, reality has it's own truth in the matter. he may not get ripped in the divorce, hopefully break even. why is it that the asshole who tempts the wife, or drugs her, or sets her up, gets a free pass. in this case I'd have to include her sister.

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by mike969805/22/15

could have been great

if you had bothered to finish it. as is a 2*

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by woodmanone05/22/15

Liked the story

the first time I read it and like it now.
He found out his wife was a cheating slut. It would be one thing to make his life hell because she was angry but to take it as far as she did was totally unacceptable. It was apparent that she used her anger as an excuse to screw around and then had the audacity to think he would just sit and take it.

For the BTB fans, me included, it would have been nice to read about how she tried to correct her "mistake" and how she was made to suffer. The way JPB wrote it we can let our imaginations run wild. For those Reconcile At All Cost fans, they can imagine how the couple came to together and rode off into the sunset as a happy couple. Not likely but that's just me. Don't believe in RAAC.

I would say that they story is finished in spite of some of the comments.
I'm sure that JPB would be glad to refund any monies spent buying his story.

Woodmanone

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by KarenE05/25/15

Good For Him!

I hope he had a recorder going while she admitted to cheating and planning to do it again!

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by Tootight106/11/15

2nd read

and I still liked it. I do believe that more retribution is due to all involved though. how can a guy screw up another guys marriage, with the help of a sister-in-law, and all walk away free? not in my book. well written, got me so hot, you don't want to know what I was thinking.

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by sugna09/21/15

He defined it

"What's to take? You cheated on me, which tells me that our marriage never meant shit to you. Okay, now I know and I can get on with my life."

That is pretty much what cheating says. In this case, they had kids too. It also says that she didn't give a damn about the kids either. With the knowledge that cheating often ends in divorce and if not divorce a shitty marriage, a cheater is really saying:
"I am willing to cause immense pain to my spouse and my children, I am willing to cause financial hardship to my family and adversely effect the outcomes of my kids childhood all for a fuck."
If he stays and does not file for divorce, they all suffer and the kids might do slightly better. They also may not do better being trapped in a miserable family. In any case, the wife fucked everything up. If the world was fair she's simply leave with the shirt on her back. If the courts were fair, the judge would tell her to leave and when the oldest kid was finished with college, she'd get half the house. But the world is not fair, courts like to give kids to cheating sluts, even though it is clear that they really do not give a shit about their kids.

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by Anonymous10/01/15

Good read, good reaction to a cheating slut

Her excuse was an all time low. She was pissed? What is she? A five year old with no control over her emotions or her actions? Dave was right. She stayed gone WAY too long if she had any hope of saving her marriage. But that wasn't really on her mind was it? She was pissed so she slept with another man and continued to fuck him in the morning instead of giving any consideration to what problems her actions might have started. Dumb bitch deserves to be divorced. She earned it.

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by rightbank10/21/15

she and her sister

got what they wanted last night

today, not so much.

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by Anonymous11/24/15

More!!

Is there more u can add to this story?

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by tazz31711/24/15

I GUESS SHE SHOWED HIM WHATS WHAT

and he couldn't be happier. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous11/24/15

Once again JPB strikes again.

I rarely ever read this dick head because 90% of the time he never finishes a story. The only reason I read this was because it was so short. 2 stars for 2/5ths of a story.

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by GeorgeAnderson01/13/16

It's over.

I agree that JPB leaves a lot of stories unfinished, but I think this tale, like the marriage it describes, is "all over bar the shouting."

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by rick_oh01/25/16

Short and sweet

but good.

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by Anonymous01/25/16

Come on you jerks

The end is as plain as the egg on your faces.

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by Anonymous01/25/16

5 for a good read and becasue the asshole of LIT didn't like it

If this fag didn't like the story it has to be good

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by Anonymous01/25/16

1*

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

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by Anonymous02/04/16

5 *'s

I like JPB's short to the point style ! There was no violence or even shouting , just a man who could read the tea leaves and have enough sense to get out while the getting was good !
Life is way too short for putting up with shit that you have a modicum of control over . To me that is when a man becomes a man and is no longer a immature kid in a man's world.
What has he got to lose in this scenario ? His wife just did the worst thing that a loving partner in a marriage (man or woman) and then acted as though she was so nonplussed about it that she was going to do it again . Who the hell would want to live with a shrew like that ? He sounds like he has a good job , and he might take a monetary hit for a year or two, but he will overcome this in time, whereas she, unless she marries money , will see her lifestyle spiral downward after a few years.
And as far as female companionship , I doubt he will be without very long. As a very wise uncle once told me when I had my first puppy love heartbreak ;we had went to the hospital together to see my Grandmother after she had surgery and I had been moping around the whole time , he took me down to the room where you view newborns through a window , and he said look there, half of those are girls ! So when one breaks your heart , mourn for one day then go find a replacement because as you can plainly see, they make them every Damn day ! Best advice I've ever gotten in my whole life !

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by sinstalker02/07/16

1

Too many profound statements that are not supported by the author's writing. read like a doctor suess book. Utterly unbelievable.

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by Goodhue04/02/16

Another Cheating Slut Bites the Dust!

What a twat! She got exactly what she deserved! Did she really think her husband would accept her cheating?! And she thought he just didn't want to go to her sister's party,not that he was cheating. - BUT now,,what happens to the kids?

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by sinstalker04/16/16

Hmm

My previous comment is not for this story not sure how this happened as I see now with my second reading I voted a five.

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by Anonymous11/12/16

well

She woke up, and stayed all day with the guy.

No she meant to cheat, maybe along has been. Her anger just made her let him know.

Great story.

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by jott5011/14/16

BAM !!!

Take that slut! ! !

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by Anonymous11/15/16

no ending

So u get a 1

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by Anonymous01/04/17

Throwback

Call me old fashioned but I like to see the guy who'd go out with a married woman get his dick stomped on.

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by Britease01/13/17

Oil change

Seems in the old USA, every other story, some guy goes out and does an oil change? In Europe that's something our cars only need every two or three years or so. Are yank cars different? Hang on a minute ....... This is a JPB thing isn't it. He must have a weird collection of cars.

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by Anonymous01/13/17

@ britease

My car gets an oil change every 5,000 miles or three months, whichever comes first. Every time it is the 5,000 miles.

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by Anonymous01/13/17

Where was an oil change mentioned in this story?

Every few years seems a long time. How many miles, or kilometers, between changes?

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