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your story is taking too long...you keep on adding so many characters..the suspense is still ok but for an online story this is becoming dull
hey anon
sorry your not bright enuf to enjoy a great adventure story. Too little sex for u I bet Stop reading if its so dull for u plenty of stroke stories for u to go find.
Leave good authors tell their stories. It is their story not yours.
Jim
Good
Keep up the good work. A good adventure well told.
Don't mind anon. His lips get too tired when he has to read too much
Really exciting
A lot of exciting reading in this chapter, with the way Susan is led into the Lyon's den.
I hope that she will make it and get back to her lover.
Thanks for the good story
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