Excellent story. This is precisely the kind of buildup I love. This gives it a realistic feeling. I hate those stories that goes into banging in the third or fourth paragraph. The wait is tough, but it is certainly worth it.
Keep it up man!
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Anonymous12/21/10
no incest/taboo
still no incest or taboo this would be better in the nonerotic area not long enough for the novels area
English
A slow start is good
But, please hurry with the next chapter.
Excellent buildup
Excellent story. This is precisely the kind of buildup I love. This gives it a realistic feeling. I hate those stories that goes into banging in the third or fourth paragraph. The wait is tough, but it is certainly worth it.
Keep it up man!
no incest/taboo
still no incest or taboo this would be better in the nonerotic area not long enough for the novels area
Excellent pacing
A good tease of a story. One page of reading, and obvious advancement of the plot. Keep it up!
And mcollect, I definitely understand the impatience. :D But, three chapters (pages) in three days isn't bad. As long as it continues. ;-)
Be patient
Actually, I submitted all six parts at once. There really is a vetting process.
*****
interesting style, please keep it up
Man, its almost funny the way this is going.
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