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Cursed Toys

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/03/11

Future

I cant wait to see more of this story

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by Anonymous04/13/11

Great story!

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by Anonymous04/23/11

Wow

I have to tell you wonderful story....I have a vivid imagination and I see my child hood toys in a different light, always wondered what it would be like if they were alive I actually now hope they would be just like your story..Great Job!

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by menatv08/02/12

Great story!

Just found this one. Very nice! Have often fantasized about toys or inanimate objects like this come alive (and become very horny) and fuck a hot girl or girls. Or sometimes I imagine myself in a female body and they come (cum!) after me..

This story touched a lot of erotic buttons with me. Very well done!

Menatv

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write more to this

Please write a second

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by OzRobert09/05/14

Good idea but..

The premise for the story is fine. It's a novel twist on the Toy Story genre. What the story lacks is good writing and genuine sexiness. The prose is wooden and has many grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.
I think a sex story needs more description than you have given to this story. I'd like to read more about the bodies of the naked women and how they' re feeling.; some more description of how the rabbit is fucking his victims. It is that sort of expansion that could lift this story.

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