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You need an editor.
Also, a female Dominant is called a Mistress, not a Master.
Didn't care for this
...but I might have if it hadn't been such a gramatical abortion. You should seriously consider having someone proof and edit your stories before you even think about posting them. This poorly written thing might have been good enough to rate a 4 or even 5, but as is, I give it a 2 at best.
earnings or earrings?
Needs an editor. I wasn't sure why she'd turn over her earnings to a stepmother. Perhaps English isn't your first language?
most bullshit story ever
most bullshit story ever
worst ever
god how bad was this..MASTER yea right....stop writing...it hurts to read this dribble
not very good
for one thing a father and daughter should not do that to each other, and another thing the step-mother should not have forced her step-daughter into having sex with her, and also forced her to call her step-mother, master, the only good thing about this story is that it is only 1 page and no other parts
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