I enjoyed your story very much. I kind of have a thing for big cocks and I loved the combination of the two fetishes. I noticed this is your second story. I have a few comments regarding the technical parts of your writing. I recommend that if you don't already have one, get a good proof reader/editor. There were several spelling errors. Also the sentence structure was a little odd at times, for example "be slow and first when you go inside me bout you can pull my hair as hard as you want." These are just small things but correcting them would make your story outstanding.
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Love the combination of fetishes!
I enjoyed your story very much. I kind of have a thing for big cocks and I loved the combination of the two fetishes. I noticed this is your second story. I have a few comments regarding the technical parts of your writing. I recommend that if you don't already have one, get a good proof reader/editor. There were several spelling errors. Also the sentence structure was a little odd at times, for example "be slow and first when you go inside me bout you can pull my hair as hard as you want." These are just small things but correcting them would make your story outstanding.
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