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Wow, you didn't give up on the story
I didn't think that you would continue with this story. Your story flows well and you have great way that you word things. Nice to read.
YAY
I'm pleased you decided to continue this story. I have really enjoyed both Mike's devious plotting and Tammy's internal struggle. Keep it up.
Good one
One of the most imaginative stories I've read. Keep up the fine work!
PAYBACK
I WOULD LOVE TO READ A STORY WHERE TAMMY GETS REVENGE ON BOTH MIKE AND CARRIE. OK I KNOW SHE IS A BITCH BUT JUST ONE CHAPTER TO TWIST THINGS UP A LITTLE
OH NO!
Another unfinished work.
why
why did you bail on this story? I know you've written more recent ones. It wasn't my favorite (by a long shot) of your stories but was outrageously imaginative. My negative is that his actions were way over the top akin to a wife tying up a husband in a chair to watch her have sex for an unproven travesty.
Damn it calflash!
You ask a question and then make it impossible to write a response. I'd tell you, but you've blocked access.
I'll tell you anyway. In The Lamp our hero has reduced his wife to something less than an adult. The next chapter had her in thrall of an under age girl, and Laurel wouldn't allow on Literotica so I gave up.
Collars
As for the collars, she could say they belonged to a beloved pet that died.
Underage
Have you tried posting on Storiesonline.net?
Are they as restrictive?
Again
Since reading the "Gold Digger" and getting very disappointed at the end I now look for the comments on the last chapter before reading. I see you have bailed out again so I will not bother.
A nice start
But a lousy finish. In the beginning I was in Mike's corner, but the leopard changed his spots and went from trying to convince his wife of her bad behavior to over the top revenge. The last two chapters I switched corners and plotted escapes for wifey, from wacking him over the head, apmutating his tongue so he could not make those wierd little rhythms and taking her chanses in juvenile. Probably the best ending you could orchestrate after where you have taken this story. Good by.
DHL
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