All Comments on 'Gordon Bk. 02 Ch. 01'

I find the use of incorrect words very disruptive to my reading process. Some examples are to-too-two, sight-site, taught-taut etc.. Spill chick's "find and replace" is not the best choice of tools. Try using:

http://dictionary.reference.com/

Another site I find useful in constructing a sentence is:

grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/

If you are using Windows, placing the aforementioned links as icons on the quick start toolbar.A single click will take you to your chosen site. To help make your own icons, you might want to use icofx which is freeware:

http://icofx.ro/

As Always,

JustSoYouKnow

one quick story ommision comment lack of details when did Jamie he/She loose her nuts and grow a Vagina;In the 2ND transport accident??? you barely mention in Gordon book 2 She was nut tucking still and not a True hermaphodite like her friend in Chapter 10 of previous LT. Gordon series

Sure I see some mistakes but so what; if there not in every line so what.I was read at a high comprehension leval

but not super fast as I read each word if the story flows and content and creativity is there.

This is free people

if It was in print with errors in a book or a e-book even its not that big of deal.

Thats what editors and secretaries are for!

Some of us are more creative but just miss all the english grammar rules cues and clues.

A few people have all the marbles and are Creative and gramatically ANAL Retentive good for them.

I wouldn't even e-mail if I worried that much.

I'm blessed with Adult ADHD

and some kind of hand script writing and typing dyslexia and word ommision my mind races ahead of what I can put on paper or screen.

SO KEEP WRITING I ENJOY YOUR WORK!!

I LIKE IT! I LIKE IT! In the next chapter are you going to tell how Jamie went from a trans to a full hermaphrodite? I'd like to know.

I LIKE IT! In the next chapter are you going to tell how Jamie went from a trans to a full hermaphrodite? I'd like to know. also book 1 was 10 chapters, I'd like to see the same here.