All Comments on 'Quickie: Is She The One?'

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mrpervy46 over 13 years ago

Pretty Good

Very good story, wouldn't be awesome if he got them both pregnaunt.

Anonymousover 13 years ago

good story

No. No, it wouldn't be awesome if he got both girls pregnant. No real introduction to the characters, but it was fun. The story was a really good read. Keep writing as you are.

Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

Delicious start!

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Anonymousabout 3 years ago

Again ... I wish I could be there to enjoy it ... gosh!

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