The build-up is spectacular. You've developed interesting characters with quirks, strengths, passion. Thanks for a compelling story!
I hope that he gets to fuck her soon. A great story full of love and sex. Thanks
The first chap was a great build up to this one. Nice to know the two of them don't hate each other as in my case. A really hot read so far.
It's not necessarily to constantly spew out vulgarities. Stories can be more erotic without resorting to that type of sophomoric language.
I feel sorry for his wife. He didn't know she had a spot? He didn't know to watch for her reaction to his touch? He didn't know how to give her orgasmic pleasure? That all this is new to him is a sad commentary on his naiveté.
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Great story so far!
The build-up is spectacular. You've developed interesting characters with quirks, strengths, passion. Thanks for a compelling story!
I'm waiting for him to admit to his sister that he's in love with her.
I hope that he gets to fuck her soon.
A great story full of love and sex.
Thanks
hot hot hot
The first chap was a great build up to this one. Nice to know the two of them don't hate each other as in my case. A really hot read so far.
It's not necessarily to constantly spew out vulgarities. Stories can be more erotic without resorting to that type of sophomoric language.
sad
I feel sorry for his wife.
He didn't know she had a spot? He didn't know to watch for her reaction to his touch? He didn't know how to give her orgasmic pleasure?
That all this is new to him is a sad commentary on his naiveté.
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