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Lonely Hearts Ch. 02

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by stevarooni12/18/10

Great story so far!

The build-up is spectacular. You've developed interesting characters with quirks, strengths, passion. Thanks for a compelling story!

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by digdaddyrich12/24/10

I'm waiting for him to admit to his sister that he's in love with her.

I hope that he gets to fuck her soon.

A great story full of love and sex.

Thanks

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by jott5003/28/15

hot hot hot

The first chap was a great build up to this one. Nice to know the two of them don't hate each other as in my case. A really hot read so far.

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by Anonymous10/05/15

It's not necessarily to constantly spew out vulgarities. Stories can be more erotic without resorting to that type of sophomoric language.

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by rightbank02/27/16

sad

I feel sorry for his wife.
He didn't know she had a spot? He didn't know to watch for her reaction to his touch? He didn't know how to give her orgasmic pleasure?
That all this is new to him is a sad commentary on his naiveté.

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