by Lien_Geller
I Love it. Thank you again. To me it is the sense of humor that you put in your story. I like the dialog and of course the sex, but it is the way you go about the sex that I really like. He is a demon but not in the rough kind of way, and seems to really care for all the girls too. I can not wait to see where you take this story to. Good luck on this and all your other endevors.
Bainsidhe
This is a great story. I can not wait for more thank you so very much for sharing. mechmanas
as much as i like thi series and the story behind it it seems a bit rushed. and the sex scenes arent as detailed as they were in aphrodesia. i would really like to see more detail in that area, thats kinda been a let down to me. but thats just my opinion...
I love this story , you are so talented. Keep it up I can't wait to read more!
I hadn't expected this story to be very good, from the descriptions. I'm happy to say though, that this is great -- the descriptions for each chapter really don't do it justice.
If you want more people to pick up this story, I'd suggest you rework the descriptions and add more tags. For example, this chapter could fit under tons of stuff, like "magic," "virgin," "popped cherry," "orgy"....just to name a few.
The story is good though. I'm looking forward to the rest of it -- just don't forget to give us more Aphrodisia!
Gotta say Pugward isn't much of a demon but damn is this a great story with fantastic plot and excellent wank-worthy sextions.
dude, I love all your stories!!! keep writing and please get published! ;)
I absolutely love your story. It.'s super awesome. However, the description of Pugward is very similar to that of Teemo from League of Legends. You know, with the green visor hat, long pointy thing in his mouth, and being a devil and all.
This just keeps getting better and better as the chapters flow from your fingertips!! I can't wait till the next chapter arrives!
Gr8 story. Reminds me of reading Robinson Caruso as a kid, the part where he realizes the ship hasn't sunk and ALL that stuff was his now!!! Of the entire book, I loved that part best. 5 stars.
Anon56